From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 From: "Mito" Subject: RE: Xen 3.0 User Manual revision Date: Tue, 9 May 2006 16:43:37 -0400 Message-ID: <002b01c673a9$3fac46c0$03c8a8c0@PAPA> References: <40F951C7DA13C0428B4A1846E7B204F30E48ED@xenexchange.xensource.com> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/mixed; boundary="===============1728144614==" Return-path: In-Reply-To: <40F951C7DA13C0428B4A1846E7B204F30E48ED@xenexchange.xensource.com> List-Unsubscribe: , List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Mime-version: 1.0 Sender: xen-users-bounces@lists.xensource.com Errors-To: xen-users-bounces@lists.xensource.com To: "'Alan C. Oehler'" , xen-users@lists.xensource.com, xen-devel@lists.xensource.com List-Id: xen-devel@lists.xenproject.org This is a multi-part message in MIME format. --===============1728144614== Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="----=_NextPart_000_002C_01C67387.B89AA6C0" This is a multi-part message in MIME format. ------=_NextPart_000_002C_01C67387.B89AA6C0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit I would like to see the addition of how to use customized networking. I finally got NAT networking working, but all documentation that I ran across was from other sources, the Xen manual doesn't even mention NAT other than in the sentence that says "other options are available". Thanks for all your work! Mito _____ From: xen-users-bounces@lists.xensource.com [mailto:xen-users-bounces@lists.xensource.com] On Behalf Of Alan C. Oehler Sent: Tuesday, May 09, 2006 12:46 PM To: xen-users@lists.xensource.com; xen-devel@lists.xensource.com Subject: [Xen-users] Xen 3.0 User Manual revision I'm the tech writer at XenSource and I'm planning to devote some energies to improving the Xen User Manual. To that end, I'm eliciting feedback from the community. Please respond here on the list if you have any notions about how the manual might be improved, and I'll collect and review the feedback, prioritize it, and do all I can to move it forward. * Is anything glaringly omitted from the manual that should be there? * Are there any sections that are notably incomplete or lacking in clarity? * Is the current organization of the material reasonable? If not, how would you like to see it changed? Thanks very much! Regards, Alan C. Oehler Sr. Technical Writer XenSource, Inc. ------=_NextPart_000_002C_01C67387.B89AA6C0 Content-Type: text/html; charset="us-ascii" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Xen 3.0 User Manual revision

I would like to see the addition of = how to use customized networking.  = I finally got NAT networking working, but all documentation that I ran across was from = other sources, the Xen manual doesn’t even mention NAT other than in the = sentence that says “other options are = available”.

 

Thanks for all your = work!

Mito

 

From: xen-users-bounces@lists.xensource.com = [mailto:xen-users-bounces@lists.xensource.com] On Behalf Of Alan C. = Oehler
Sent: Tuesday, May 09, = 2006 12:46 PM
To: = xen-users@lists.xensource.com; xen-devel@lists.xensource.com
Subject: [Xen-users] Xen = 3.0 User Manual revision

 

I'm the tech writer at XenSource and I'm planning to devote some energies to = improving the Xen User Manual. To that end, I'm eliciting feedback from the = community.

Please respond here on the list if you have any notions about how the = manual might be improved, and I'll collect and review the feedback, prioritize = it, and do all I can to move it forward.

* Is anything glaringly omitted from the manual that should be = there?

* Are there any sections that are notably incomplete or lacking in = clarity?

* Is the current organization of the material reasonable? If not, how = would you like to see it changed?

Thanks very much!

Regards,

Alan C. Oehler
Sr. Technical Writer
XenSource, Inc.

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