[PATCH 03/10] Docs: git tag: Revise a paragraph.

[Michael Witten <mfwitten@gmail.com>]

Signed-off-by: Michael Witten <mfwitten@gmail.com>
---
 Documentation/git-tag.txt |    7 ++++---
 1 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/git-tag.txt b/Documentation/git-tag.txt
index e276393..68eebee 100644
--- a/Documentation/git-tag.txt
+++ b/Documentation/git-tag.txt
@@ -189,9 +189,10 @@ the toplevel but not limited to them.  Mere mortals when pulling
 from each other do not necessarily want to automatically get
 private anchor point tags from the other person.
 
-You would notice "please pull" messages on the mailing list says
-repo URL and branch name alone.  This is designed to be easily
-cut&pasted to a 'git fetch' command line:
+Often, "please pull" messages on the mailing list just provide
+two pieces of information: a repo URL and a branch name; this
+is designed to be easily cut&pasted at the end of a 'git fetch'
+command line:
 
 ------------
 Linus, please pull from
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