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From: Bart Van Assche <bart.vanassche-Re5JQEeQqe8AvxtiuMwx3w@public.gmane.org>
To: linux-rdma-u79uwXL29TY76Z2rM5mHXA@public.gmane.org
Cc: Roland Dreier <rolandd-FYB4Gu1CFyUAvxtiuMwx3w@public.gmane.org>
Subject: IB/documentation: fix grammar in ipoib.txt
Date: Sat, 5 Dec 2009 14:29:24 +0100	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <200912051429.24408.bart.vanassche@gmail.com> (raw)

Single-sentence grammar fix for Documentation/infiniband/ipoib.txt.

Signed-off-by: Bart Van Assche <bart.vanassche-Re5JQEeQqe8AvxtiuMwx3w@public.gmane.org>
Cc: Roland Dreier <rolandd-FYB4Gu1CFyUAvxtiuMwx3w@public.gmane.org>

diff --git a/Documentation/infiniband/ipoib.txt b/Documentation/infiniband/ipoib.txt
index 6d40f00..64eeb55 100644
--- a/Documentation/infiniband/ipoib.txt
+++ b/Documentation/infiniband/ipoib.txt
@@ -36,11 +36,11 @@ Datagram vs Connected modes
   fabric with a 2K MTU, the IPoIB MTU will be 2048 - 4 = 2044 bytes.
 
   In connected mode, the IB RC (Reliable Connected) transport is used.
-  Connected mode is to takes advantage of the connected nature of the
-  IB transport and allows an MTU up to the maximal IP packet size of
-  64K, which reduces the number of IP packets needed for handling
-  large UDP datagrams, TCP segments, etc and increases the performance
-  for large messages.
+  Connected mode takes advantage of the connected nature of the IB
+  transport and allows an MTU up to the maximal IP packet size of 64K,
+  which reduces the number of IP packets needed for handling large UDP
+  datagrams, TCP segments, etc and increases the performance for large
+  messages.
 
   In connected mode, the interface's UD QP is still used for multicast
   and communication with peers that don't support connected mode. In
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             reply	other threads:[~2009-12-05 13:29 UTC|newest]

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2009-12-05 13:29 Bart Van Assche [this message]
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2009-12-09 22:21   ` IB/documentation: fix grammar in ipoib.txt Roland Dreier

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