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From: "Michael S. Tsirkin" <mst@redhat.com>
To: virtualization@lists.linux-foundation.org,
	Amit Shah <amit.shah@redhat.com>
Subject: [PATCH] virtio-spec: serial: english tweak
Date: Sun, 9 Sep 2012 15:11:17 +0300	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <20120909121116.GA2972@redhat.com> (raw)

"A number of virtqueues are created" seems clearer
than "the number of virtqueues": it's
virtqueues that are created not the number.

Signed-off-by: Michael S. Tsirkin <mst@redhat.com>
---

I'm not a native english speaker but the below
seems correct to me. Rusty?

 virtio-spec.lyx | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/virtio-spec.lyx b/virtio-spec.lyx
index d9626a9..a29315c 100644
--- a/virtio-spec.lyx
+++ b/virtio-spec.lyx
@@ -6406,7 +6406,7 @@ If the VIRTIO_CONSOLE_F_MULTIPORT feature is negotiated, the driver can
  spawn multiple ports, not all of which may be attached to a console.
  Some could be generic ports.
  In this case, the control virtqueues are enabled and according to the max_nr_po
-rts configuration-space value, the appropriate number of virtqueues are
+rts configuration-space value, an appropriate number of virtqueues are
  created.
  A control message indicating the driver is ready is sent to the host.
  The host can then send control messages for adding new ports to the device.
-- 
MST

             reply	other threads:[~2012-09-09 12:11 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 5+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2012-09-09 12:11 Michael S. Tsirkin [this message]
2012-09-09 20:58 ` [PATCH] virtio-spec: serial: english tweak Amit Shah
2012-11-12 16:56 ` Michael S. Tsirkin
2012-12-04  6:08 ` Amos Kong
2013-01-03  0:15 ` Rusty Russell

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