From: Luis de Bethencourt <luis@debethencourt.com>
To: mchehab@osg.samsung.com
Cc: corbet@lwn.net, linux-media@vger.kernel.org,
linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org
Subject: [PATCH] DocBook: grammatical correction on DVB Overview
Date: Fri, 6 Feb 2015 18:17:52 +0000 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <20150206181752.GA25234@biggie> (raw)
---
Documentation/DocBook/media/dvb/intro.xml | 4 ++--
1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
diff --git a/Documentation/DocBook/media/dvb/intro.xml b/Documentation/DocBook/media/dvb/intro.xml
index 2048b53..e98bfa9 100644
--- a/Documentation/DocBook/media/dvb/intro.xml
+++ b/Documentation/DocBook/media/dvb/intro.xml
@@ -85,8 +85,8 @@ real time and re-inserted into the TS.</para>
<para>Demultiplexer which filters the incoming DVB stream</para>
<para>The demultiplexer splits the TS into its components like audio and
-video streams. Besides usually several of such audio and video streams
-it also contains data streams with information about the programs
+video streams. As well as several of such audio and video streams, it
+usually also contains data streams with information about the programs
offered in this or other streams of the same provider.</para>
</listitem>
--
2.1.3
next reply other threads:[~2015-02-06 18:19 UTC|newest]
Thread overview: 3+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2015-02-06 18:17 Luis de Bethencourt [this message]
2015-02-06 18:23 ` [PATCH] DocBook: grammatical correction on DVB Overview Jonathan Corbet
2015-02-06 18:27 ` Luis de Bethencourt
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