From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Received: from list by lists.gnu.org with archive (Exim 4.71) id 1YzM2T-0000GU-Ro for mharc-qemu-trivial@gnu.org; Mon, 01 Jun 2015 05:29:45 -0400 Received: from eggs.gnu.org ([2001:4830:134:3::10]:48362) by lists.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1YzM2R-0000CN-F6 for qemu-trivial@nongnu.org; Mon, 01 Jun 2015 05:29:44 -0400 Received: from Debian-exim by eggs.gnu.org with spam-scanned (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1YzM2Q-0002Ks-9r for qemu-trivial@nongnu.org; Mon, 01 Jun 2015 05:29:43 -0400 Received: from mx1.redhat.com ([209.132.183.28]:34927) by eggs.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1YzM2K-0002Je-UG; Mon, 01 Jun 2015 05:29:37 -0400 Received: from int-mx14.intmail.prod.int.phx2.redhat.com (int-mx14.intmail.prod.int.phx2.redhat.com [10.5.11.27]) by mx1.redhat.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 5D21A3702E8; Mon, 1 Jun 2015 09:29:36 +0000 (UTC) Received: from work-vm (ovpn-116-48.ams2.redhat.com [10.36.116.48]) by int-mx14.intmail.prod.int.phx2.redhat.com (8.14.4/8.14.4) with ESMTP id t519TWF5008246 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 bits=256 verify=NO); Mon, 1 Jun 2015 05:29:34 -0400 Date: Mon, 1 Jun 2015 10:29:32 +0100 From: "Dr. David Alan Gilbert" To: Markus Armbruster Message-ID: <20150601092931.GE2314@work-vm> References: <1432925572-487-1-git-send-email-dgilbert@redhat.com> <5569C5F9.3080608@msgid.tls.msk.ru> <87pp5flvka.fsf@blackfin.pond.sub.org> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <87pp5flvka.fsf@blackfin.pond.sub.org> User-Agent: Mutt/1.5.23 (2014-03-12) X-Scanned-By: MIMEDefang 2.68 on 10.5.11.27 X-detected-operating-system: by eggs.gnu.org: GNU/Linux 3.x X-Received-From: 209.132.183.28 Cc: qemu-trivial@nongnu.org, Michael Tokarev , qemu-devel@nongnu.org, quintela@redhat.com Subject: Re: [Qemu-trivial] [Qemu-devel] [PATCH 1/1] Add -incoming help text X-BeenThere: qemu-trivial@nongnu.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 01 Jun 2015 09:29:44 -0000 * Markus Armbruster (armbru@redhat.com) wrote: > Michael Tokarev writes: > > > 29.05.2015 21:52, Dr. David Alan Gilbert (git) wrote: > >> From: "Dr. David Alan Gilbert" > >> > >> The help/man text for > >> > >> -incoming defer > >> > >> didn't make it through the merge of the code that implemented it. > >> > >> Signed-off-by: Dr. David Alan Gilbert > >> --- > >> qemu-options.hx | 6 +++++- > >> 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-) > >> > >> diff --git a/qemu-options.hx b/qemu-options.hx > >> index dad49cf..3085412 100644 > >> --- a/qemu-options.hx > >> +++ b/qemu-options.hx > >> @@ -3238,7 +3238,9 @@ DEF("incoming", HAS_ARG, QEMU_OPTION_incoming, \ > >> "-incoming fd:fd\n" \ > >> "-incoming exec:cmdline\n" \ > >> " accept incoming migration on given file descriptor\n" \ > >> - " or from given external command\n", > >> + " or from given external command\n" \ > >> + "-incoming defer\n" \ > >> + " wait for the URI to be specified via migrate_incoming\n", > >> QEMU_ARCH_ALL) > >> STEXI > >> @item -incoming tcp:[@var{host}]:@var{port}[,to=@var{maxport}][,ipv4][,ipv6] > >> @@ -3254,6 +3256,8 @@ Accept incoming migration from a given filedescriptor. > >> > >> @item -incoming exec:@var{cmdline} > >> Accept incoming migration as an output from specified external command. > >> +@item -incoming defer > >> +Wait for the URI to be specified via migrate_incoming. > > > > I wonder what's the reason of mentioning it twice with > > such a short and _identical_ text each time... > > Because that's the way our documentation works. > > The first hunk patches the fourth argument of DEF(), which goes into > -help. > > The second hunk patches STEXI..ETEXI, which goes via qemu-options.texi > into qemu.1 and qemu-doc.{dvi,info,html,pdf}. > > > Maybe > > it's a good idea to reword the second message a bit. > > Because actually it is not clear what does the whole > > thing mean, what qemu will do when starting? Will it > > accept other commands? > > You're right in that .texi allows more verbose explanations than -help. > > David's text looks okay to me as is. Perhaps your questions inspire > further improvements. How about changing the second part to. +@item -incoming defer +Wait for the URI to be specified via migrate_incoming. The monitor can +be used to change settings (such as migration parameters) prior to issuing +the migrate_incoming to allow the migration to begin. Dave -- Dr. David Alan Gilbert / dgilbert@redhat.com / Manchester, UK From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Received: from eggs.gnu.org ([2001:4830:134:3::10]:48351) by lists.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1YzM2P-0000C4-3w for qemu-devel@nongnu.org; Mon, 01 Jun 2015 05:29:42 -0400 Received: from Debian-exim by eggs.gnu.org with spam-scanned (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1YzM2L-0002Ji-2c for qemu-devel@nongnu.org; Mon, 01 Jun 2015 05:29:41 -0400 Date: Mon, 1 Jun 2015 10:29:32 +0100 From: "Dr. David Alan Gilbert" Message-ID: <20150601092931.GE2314@work-vm> References: <1432925572-487-1-git-send-email-dgilbert@redhat.com> <5569C5F9.3080608@msgid.tls.msk.ru> <87pp5flvka.fsf@blackfin.pond.sub.org> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <87pp5flvka.fsf@blackfin.pond.sub.org> Subject: Re: [Qemu-devel] [PATCH 1/1] Add -incoming help text List-Id: List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , To: Markus Armbruster Cc: qemu-trivial@nongnu.org, Michael Tokarev , qemu-devel@nongnu.org, quintela@redhat.com * Markus Armbruster (armbru@redhat.com) wrote: > Michael Tokarev writes: > > > 29.05.2015 21:52, Dr. David Alan Gilbert (git) wrote: > >> From: "Dr. David Alan Gilbert" > >> > >> The help/man text for > >> > >> -incoming defer > >> > >> didn't make it through the merge of the code that implemented it. > >> > >> Signed-off-by: Dr. David Alan Gilbert > >> --- > >> qemu-options.hx | 6 +++++- > >> 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-) > >> > >> diff --git a/qemu-options.hx b/qemu-options.hx > >> index dad49cf..3085412 100644 > >> --- a/qemu-options.hx > >> +++ b/qemu-options.hx > >> @@ -3238,7 +3238,9 @@ DEF("incoming", HAS_ARG, QEMU_OPTION_incoming, \ > >> "-incoming fd:fd\n" \ > >> "-incoming exec:cmdline\n" \ > >> " accept incoming migration on given file descriptor\n" \ > >> - " or from given external command\n", > >> + " or from given external command\n" \ > >> + "-incoming defer\n" \ > >> + " wait for the URI to be specified via migrate_incoming\n", > >> QEMU_ARCH_ALL) > >> STEXI > >> @item -incoming tcp:[@var{host}]:@var{port}[,to=@var{maxport}][,ipv4][,ipv6] > >> @@ -3254,6 +3256,8 @@ Accept incoming migration from a given filedescriptor. > >> > >> @item -incoming exec:@var{cmdline} > >> Accept incoming migration as an output from specified external command. > >> +@item -incoming defer > >> +Wait for the URI to be specified via migrate_incoming. > > > > I wonder what's the reason of mentioning it twice with > > such a short and _identical_ text each time... > > Because that's the way our documentation works. > > The first hunk patches the fourth argument of DEF(), which goes into > -help. > > The second hunk patches STEXI..ETEXI, which goes via qemu-options.texi > into qemu.1 and qemu-doc.{dvi,info,html,pdf}. > > > Maybe > > it's a good idea to reword the second message a bit. > > Because actually it is not clear what does the whole > > thing mean, what qemu will do when starting? Will it > > accept other commands? > > You're right in that .texi allows more verbose explanations than -help. > > David's text looks okay to me as is. Perhaps your questions inspire > further improvements. How about changing the second part to. +@item -incoming defer +Wait for the URI to be specified via migrate_incoming. The monitor can +be used to change settings (such as migration parameters) prior to issuing +the migrate_incoming to allow the migration to begin. Dave -- Dr. David Alan Gilbert / dgilbert@redhat.com / Manchester, UK