From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: Received: from e18.ny.us.ibm.com ([129.33.205.208]:60326 "EHLO e18.ny.us.ibm.com" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S1750932AbcD1OHC (ORCPT ); Thu, 28 Apr 2016 10:07:02 -0400 Received: from localhost by e18.ny.us.ibm.com with IBM ESMTP SMTP Gateway: Authorized Use Only! Violators will be prosecuted for from ; Thu, 28 Apr 2016 10:07:01 -0400 Received: from b01cxnp23032.gho.pok.ibm.com (b01cxnp23032.gho.pok.ibm.com [9.57.198.27]) by d01dlp02.pok.ibm.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id A37526E804F for ; Thu, 28 Apr 2016 10:06:42 -0400 (EDT) Received: from d01av01.pok.ibm.com (d01av01.pok.ibm.com [9.56.224.215]) by b01cxnp23032.gho.pok.ibm.com (8.14.9/8.14.9/NCO v10.0) with ESMTP id u3SE6vS136306968 for ; Thu, 28 Apr 2016 14:06:57 GMT Received: from d01av01.pok.ibm.com (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by d01av01.pok.ibm.com (8.14.4/8.14.4/NCO v10.0 AVout) with ESMTP id u3SE6tpj004961 for ; Thu, 28 Apr 2016 10:06:57 -0400 Date: Thu, 28 Apr 2016 07:07:31 -0700 From: "Paul E. McKenney" Subject: Re: [PATCH] whymb: Remove redundant words Message-ID: <20160428140731.GE4609@linux.vnet.ibm.com> Reply-To: paulmck@linux.vnet.ibm.com References: MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: Sender: perfbook-owner@vger.kernel.org List-ID: To: Akira Yokosawa Cc: perfbook@vger.kernel.org On Thu, Apr 28, 2016 at 08:18:15PM +0900, Akira Yokosawa wrote: > >From 53364b467603cd5ec9e1f6a12ad9377a76ebb72a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 > From: Akira Yokosawa > Date: Thu, 28 Apr 2016 20:08:32 +0900 > Subject: [PATCH] whymb: Remove redundant words > > The sentence fixed in commit 3d3ce3673746 ("Fix now-obsolete back > reference to Compaq Wizard web page") has redundant words around > the citation. This commit removes them. > > Signed-off-by: Akira Yokosawa Good catch, queued! And no, that change wasn't one of my better efforts, was it? Thanx, Paul > --- > appendix/whymb/whymemorybarriers.tex | 3 +-- > 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) > > diff --git a/appendix/whymb/whymemorybarriers.tex b/appendix/whymb/whymemorybarriers.tex > index 6d09bfc..0c3b83e 100644 > --- a/appendix/whymb/whymemorybarriers.tex > +++ b/appendix/whymb/whymemorybarriers.tex > @@ -1788,8 +1788,7 @@ busy, but cache bank~0 is idle. > This could result in the cache invalidates for the new element being > delayed, so that the reading CPU gets the new value for the pointer, > but sees the old cached values for the new element. > -See the documentation called out earlier~\cite{Compaq01} called out > -earlier for more information, > +See the documentation~\cite{Compaq01} called out earlier for more information, > or, again, if you think that I am just making all this up.\footnote{ > Of course, the astute reader will have already recognized that > Alpha is nowhere near as mean and nasty as it could be, > -- > 1.9.1 >