From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: Received: from e37.co.us.ibm.com ([32.97.110.158]:44426 "EHLO e37.co.us.ibm.com" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S1752404AbcEAWDd (ORCPT ); Sun, 1 May 2016 18:03:33 -0400 Received: from localhost by e37.co.us.ibm.com with IBM ESMTP SMTP Gateway: Authorized Use Only! Violators will be prosecuted for from ; Sun, 1 May 2016 16:03:32 -0600 Received: from b01cxnp23034.gho.pok.ibm.com (b01cxnp23034.gho.pok.ibm.com [9.57.198.29]) by d03dlp03.boulder.ibm.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 040E019D805E for ; Sun, 1 May 2016 16:03:13 -0600 (MDT) Received: from d01av01.pok.ibm.com (d01av01.pok.ibm.com [9.56.224.215]) by b01cxnp23034.gho.pok.ibm.com (8.14.9/8.14.9/NCO v10.0) with ESMTP id u41M3T0239780404 for ; Sun, 1 May 2016 22:03:29 GMT Received: from d01av01.pok.ibm.com (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by d01av01.pok.ibm.com (8.14.4/8.14.4/NCO v10.0 AVout) with ESMTP id u41M3Twm032529 for ; Sun, 1 May 2016 18:03:29 -0400 Date: Sun, 1 May 2016 15:03:31 -0700 From: "Paul E. McKenney" Subject: Re: [FOLLOW-UP RFC PATCH] advsync: Minor fix of word choice Message-ID: <20160501220331.GN3686@linux.vnet.ibm.com> Reply-To: paulmck@linux.vnet.ibm.com References: <6cc7de73-01cd-a186-78c4-2cce19f74d31@gmail.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: Sender: perfbook-owner@vger.kernel.org List-ID: To: Akira Yokosawa Cc: perfbook@vger.kernel.org On Sat, Apr 30, 2016 at 05:29:51PM +0900, Akira Yokosawa wrote: > >From 67433ddbf67a7d37e83426fed98228c245408c89 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 > From: Akira Yokosawa > Date: Sat, 30 Apr 2016 17:08:03 +0900 > Subject: [FOLLOW-UP RFC PATCH] advsync: Minor fix of word choice > > This should have been "the vertical line", not "the vertical bar". > > Signed-off-by: Akira Yokosawa I squashed this into your previous patch and also pulled in fixes for a couple of grammatical nits. Thank you! Thanx, Paul > --- > advsync/memorybarriers.tex | 2 +- > 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) > > diff --git a/advsync/memorybarriers.tex b/advsync/memorybarriers.tex > index dfbf0f3..9cc546c 100644 > --- a/advsync/memorybarriers.tex > +++ b/advsync/memorybarriers.tex > @@ -378,7 +378,7 @@ Again, CPU~0 coordinates the test, so does not record any values. > All CPUs eventually agree on the final value of 9, but not before > the values 15 and 12 take early leads. > Note that there are fourteen different opinions on the variable's value > -at time 21 indicated by the vertical bar in the lower diagram. > +at time 21 indicated by the vertical line in the lower diagram. > Note also that all CPUs see sequences whose orderings are consistent with > the directed graph shown in > Figure~\ref{fig:advsync:Possible Global Orders With More Simultaneous Values}. > -- > 1.9.1 > >