From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: Received: from mx0a-001b2d01.pphosted.com ([148.163.156.1]:42545 "EHLO mx0a-001b2d01.pphosted.com" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S1754349AbdDDQCe (ORCPT ); Tue, 4 Apr 2017 12:02:34 -0400 Received: from pps.filterd (m0098393.ppops.net [127.0.0.1]) by mx0a-001b2d01.pphosted.com (8.16.0.20/8.16.0.20) with SMTP id v34Frfot053377 for ; Tue, 4 Apr 2017 12:02:33 -0400 Received: from e15.ny.us.ibm.com (e15.ny.us.ibm.com [129.33.205.205]) by mx0a-001b2d01.pphosted.com with ESMTP id 29kydgmstg-1 (version=TLSv1.2 cipher=AES256-SHA bits=256 verify=NOT) for ; Tue, 04 Apr 2017 12:02:33 -0400 Received: from localhost by e15.ny.us.ibm.com with IBM ESMTP SMTP Gateway: Authorized Use Only! Violators will be prosecuted for from ; Tue, 4 Apr 2017 12:02:32 -0400 Date: Tue, 4 Apr 2017 09:02:29 -0700 From: "Paul E. McKenney" Subject: Re: [RFC PATCH 00/12] advsync: Rename LOCK/UNLOCK to ACQUIRE/RELEASE Reply-To: paulmck@linux.vnet.ibm.com References: MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: Message-Id: <20170404160229.GW3637@linux.vnet.ibm.com> Sender: perfbook-owner@vger.kernel.org List-ID: To: Akira Yokosawa Cc: perfbook@vger.kernel.org On Sat, Apr 01, 2017 at 11:09:27AM +0900, Akira Yokosawa wrote: > >From 8aa4157fbed720fd3e8a259de620184003bf09da Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 > From: Akira Yokosawa > Date: Sat, 1 Apr 2017 10:48:45 +0900 > Subject: [RFC PATCH 00/12] advsync: Rename LOCK/UNLOCK to ACQUIRE/RELEASE > > Hi Paul, > > This series mostly corresponds to commit 2e4f5382d12a ("locking/doc: > Rename LOCK/UNLOCK to ACQUIRE/RELEASE") in Linux kernel repository. > Although Documentation/memory-barriers.txt has a lot of updated > contents after the import to perfbook, this series basically > does substitution of existing "LOCK/UNLOCK". > > Patches 1--3 do simple substitutions. > Patch 4 does another replacement not included in the original commit. > Patch 5 is an attempt to add a footnote on "LOCK/UNLOCK" wording. You > may want to rewrite the text of the footnote. > Patch 6 replaces some of "the" with "a/an". I think they are reasonable, > but this is from an non-native POV. I might missing something. > Patch 7 is to go along with current wording in memory-barriers.txt. > Patch 8 is a big patch in line count, but it just adds proper nbsps > (in LaTeX sense). > Patch 9 adjusts the position of a footnote appended in the previous > patch set. > Patch 10 is an independent trivial typo fix. > Patches 11 and 12 are tweaks for a better layout. Queued and pushed, thank you! Thanx, Paul > Thanks, Akira > -- > Akira Yokosawa (12): > advsync: LOCK/UNLOCK -> ACQUIRE/RELEASE (part 1) > advsync: LOCK/UNLOCK -> ACQUIRE/RELEASE (part 2) > advsync: LOCK/UNLOCK -> ACQUIRE/RELEASE (part 3) > advsync: More replacement to ACQUIRE > advsync: Add footnote mentioning LOCK/UNLOCK wording > advsync: Modify usage of definite article > advsync: Substitute 'guarantee' with 'implication' > advsync: Properly use nbsp > advsync: Move footnote on transitivity forward > advsync: Fix line number called out > advsync: Add extdash shortcut > advsync: Avoid indent after minipage > > advsync/memorybarriers.tex | 504 +++++++++++++++++++++++---------------------- > 1 file changed, 254 insertions(+), 250 deletions(-) > > -- > 2.7.4 >