From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: Received: from mx0b-001b2d01.pphosted.com ([148.163.158.5]:48656 "EHLO mx0a-001b2d01.pphosted.com" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-FAIL) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S1750815AbdFQEct (ORCPT ); Sat, 17 Jun 2017 00:32:49 -0400 Received: from pps.filterd (m0098416.ppops.net [127.0.0.1]) by mx0b-001b2d01.pphosted.com (8.16.0.20/8.16.0.20) with SMTP id v5H4SqtY021631 for ; Sat, 17 Jun 2017 00:32:48 -0400 Received: from e14.ny.us.ibm.com (e14.ny.us.ibm.com [129.33.205.204]) by mx0b-001b2d01.pphosted.com with ESMTP id 2b4pfbbhb6-1 (version=TLSv1.2 cipher=AES256-SHA bits=256 verify=NOT) for ; Sat, 17 Jun 2017 00:32:48 -0400 Received: from localhost by e14.ny.us.ibm.com with IBM ESMTP SMTP Gateway: Authorized Use Only! Violators will be prosecuted for from ; Sat, 17 Jun 2017 00:32:47 -0400 Date: Fri, 16 Jun 2017 21:32:44 -0700 From: "Paul E. McKenney" Subject: Re: [PATCH 0/8] future/QC: Cosmetic fixes and improvements Reply-To: paulmck@linux.vnet.ibm.com References: <8919b898-9e43-8f72-39ce-5d31dc84f45d@gmail.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <8919b898-9e43-8f72-39ce-5d31dc84f45d@gmail.com> Message-Id: <20170617043244.GH3721@linux.vnet.ibm.com> Sender: perfbook-owner@vger.kernel.org List-ID: To: Akira Yokosawa Cc: perfbook@vger.kernel.org On Sat, Jun 17, 2017 at 12:54:47PM +0900, Akira Yokosawa wrote: > >From e5738e83414b3c3d30d616543bb2f70cbb80bcca Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 > From: Akira Yokosawa > Date: Sat, 17 Jun 2017 10:44:54 +0900 > Subject: [PATCH 0/8] future/QC: Cosmetic fixes and improvements > > Hi Paul, > > This patch set mostly fixes and improves LaTeX source of QC section. > > Patch 1 adds patterns in hyphen2endash.sh. > > Patch 2 gives consistent looks to tables as in other tables in > perfbook. > > Patch 3 fixes typos in SI unit symbols and usage of math mode. > > Patch 4 Adds whitespaces between numerical values and unit symbols. > This is recommended in NIST style guide (referred to in the change > log). Since this section treats topics covering quantum mechanics, > I want it to have a similar look as a scientific paper. > In other parts of perfbbok, I have quite a few places I want to add > whitespaces, but I'm not sure that matches your preference. > If you'd like such changes, I can produce patches to do so. > > Patch 5 uses axis names "X-axis", "Y-axis", and "Z-axis" in the > lists of "Programming Model" section. I also tried other forms of > "x-axis", "x axis", and "X axis", but "X-axis" is my preference. > > Patch 6 seems a trivial grammatical fix, but might be unnecessary. > I'm not sure. > > Patch 7 gives representation of ket commonly used in quantum mechanics > papers. > > Patch 8 changes the look of QC operators. Special treatment of > dagger symbol in description labels might be excessive, but > it gives better result in my point of view. > > So, I'm not sure you like patches 4--8. Please try and push as > much as you like. And feel free to ask me a respin of the patches > you don't like as is. The all look good, so I queued and pushed them, thank you! I also queued a change to fix my failure to define "qubit" at first use. It would be good to have a consistent and professional look, so please do feel free to make similar fixes elsewhere. I am going to have to make myself some sort of cheat sheet to get all this right, though! ;-) Thanx, Paul > Thanks, Akira > -- > Akira Yokosawa (8): > hyphen2endash: Add patterns for QC section > future/QC: Tweak appearance of tables > future/QC: Fix typo in unit symbol and usage of math mode > future/QC: Add narrow space before unit symbol > future/QC: Use consistent axis names > future/QC: Add missing 'has' in description list > future/QC: Use \ket{} macro for |0> and |1> > future/QC: Denote QC operators as such > > future/QC.tex | 123 +++++++++++++++++++++++---------------------- > perfbook.tex | 5 ++ > utilities/hyphen2endash.sh | 8 +++ > 3 files changed, 76 insertions(+), 60 deletions(-) > > -- > 2.7.4 >