From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: Received: from mx0b-001b2d01.pphosted.com ([148.163.158.5]:51322 "EHLO mx0a-001b2d01.pphosted.com" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-FAIL) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S932419AbeCLCJh (ORCPT ); Sun, 11 Mar 2018 22:09:37 -0400 Received: from pps.filterd (m0098414.ppops.net [127.0.0.1]) by mx0b-001b2d01.pphosted.com (8.16.0.22/8.16.0.22) with SMTP id w2C29awC112617 for ; Sun, 11 Mar 2018 22:09:36 -0400 Received: from e11.ny.us.ibm.com (e11.ny.us.ibm.com [129.33.205.201]) by mx0b-001b2d01.pphosted.com with ESMTP id 2gmwjwjd58-1 (version=TLSv1.2 cipher=AES256-SHA256 bits=256 verify=NOT) for ; Sun, 11 Mar 2018 22:09:35 -0400 Received: from localhost by e11.ny.us.ibm.com with IBM ESMTP SMTP Gateway: Authorized Use Only! Violators will be prosecuted for from ; Sun, 11 Mar 2018 22:09:25 -0400 Date: Sun, 11 Mar 2018 19:10:01 -0700 From: "Paul E. McKenney" Subject: Re: [PATCH] intro: Polish a sentence for MIPS graphs Reply-To: paulmck@linux.vnet.ibm.com References: <20180311125241.30343-1-sj38.park@gmail.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <20180311125241.30343-1-sj38.park@gmail.com> Message-Id: <20180312021001.GP3918@linux.vnet.ibm.com> Sender: perfbook-owner@vger.kernel.org List-ID: To: SeongJae Park Cc: perfbook@vger.kernel.org On Sun, Mar 11, 2018 at 09:52:41PM +0900, SeongJae Park wrote: > This commit polishes a sentence for MIPS graphs, which is updated by > commit "cpu: Update MIPS graphs, adding past five years of CPUs" > (71d8328f3d18). The sentence is saying that the updated graph is > showing past three decades, though it is now showing past forty years > and the sentence also says so at last. This commit polishes the > sentence to say about the fourty years. > > Signed-off-by: SeongJae Park Good catch, applied, thank you! Thanx, Paul > --- > intro/intro.tex | 2 +- > 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) > > diff --git a/intro/intro.tex b/intro/intro.tex > index a4ec3a8..2f5679d 100644 > --- a/intro/intro.tex > +++ b/intro/intro.tex > @@ -449,7 +449,7 @@ The CSIRAC and the Z80 are two points in a long-term trend, as can be > seen in > Figure~\ref{fig:intro:MIPS per Die for Intel CPUs}. > This figure plots an approximation to computational power per die > -over the past three decades, showing an impressive six-order-of-magnitude > +over the past four decades, showing an impressive six-order-of-magnitude > increase over a period of forty years. > Note that the advent of multicore CPUs has permitted this increase to > continue apace despite the clock-frequency wall encountered in 2003, > -- > 2.10.0 >