From: Valentin Obst <kernel@valentinobst.de>
To: Valentin Obst <fraunhofer@valentinobst.de>,
Miguel Ojeda <ojeda@kernel.org>,
Alex Gaynor <alex.gaynor@gmail.com>,
Wedson Almeida Filho <wedsonaf@gmail.com>
Cc: rust-for-linux@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org,
Trevor Gross <tmgross@umich.edu>,
Martin Rodriguez Reboredo <yakoyoku@gmail.com>
Subject: [PATCH v2 01/12] rust: kernel: fix multiple typos in documentation
Date: Tue, 23 Jan 2024 16:00:55 +0100 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <20240123150112.124084-2-kernel@valentinobst.de> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20240123150112.124084-1-kernel@valentinobst.de>
Fixes multiple trivial typos in documentation and comments of the
kernel crate.
allocator:
- Fix a trivial list item alignment issue in the last SAFETY comment of
`krealloc_aligned`.
init:
- Replace 'type' with 'trait' in the doc comments of the `PinInit` and
`Init` traits.
- Add colons before starting lists.
- Add spaces between the type and equal sign to respect the code
formatting rules in example code.
- End a sentence with a full stop instead of a colon.
ioctl:
- Replace 'an' with 'a' where appropriate.
str:
- Replace 'Return' with 'Returns' in the doc comment of `bytes_written`
as the text describes what the function does.
sync/lock:
- Fix a trivial list item alignment issue in the Safety section of the
`Backend` trait's description.
sync/lock/spinlock:
- The code in this module operates on spinlocks, not mutexes. Thus,
replace 'mutex' with 'spinlock' in the SAFETY comment of `unlock`.
workqueue:
- Replace "wont" with "won't" in the doc comment of `__enqueue`.
Signed-off-by: Valentin Obst <kernel@valentinobst.de>
Reviewed-by: Trevor Gross <tmgross@umich.edu>
Reviewed-by: Martin Rodriguez Reboredo <yakoyoku@gmail.com>
---
rust/kernel/allocator.rs | 2 +-
rust/kernel/init.rs | 16 ++++++++--------
rust/kernel/ioctl.rs | 4 ++--
rust/kernel/str.rs | 2 +-
rust/kernel/sync/lock.rs | 4 ++--
rust/kernel/sync/lock/spinlock.rs | 2 +-
rust/kernel/workqueue.rs | 2 +-
7 files changed, 16 insertions(+), 16 deletions(-)
diff --git a/rust/kernel/allocator.rs b/rust/kernel/allocator.rs
index 4b057e837358..01ad139e19bc 100644
--- a/rust/kernel/allocator.rs
+++ b/rust/kernel/allocator.rs
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ unsafe fn krealloc_aligned(ptr: *mut u8, new_layout: Layout, flags: bindings::gf
// - `ptr` is either null or a pointer returned from a previous `k{re}alloc()` by the
// function safety requirement.
// - `size` is greater than 0 since it's either a `layout.size()` (which cannot be zero
- // according to the function safety requirement) or a result from `next_power_of_two()`.
+ // according to the function safety requirement) or a result from `next_power_of_two()`.
unsafe { bindings::krealloc(ptr as *const core::ffi::c_void, size, flags) as *mut u8 }
}
diff --git a/rust/kernel/init.rs b/rust/kernel/init.rs
index 65be9ae57b80..16a99984622c 100644
--- a/rust/kernel/init.rs
+++ b/rust/kernel/init.rs
@@ -751,10 +751,10 @@ macro_rules! try_init {
///
/// # Safety
///
-/// When implementing this type you will need to take great care. Also there are probably very few
+/// When implementing this trait you will need to take great care. Also there are probably very few
/// cases where a manual implementation is necessary. Use [`pin_init_from_closure`] where possible.
///
-/// The [`PinInit::__pinned_init`] function
+/// The [`PinInit::__pinned_init`] function:
/// - returns `Ok(())` if it initialized every field of `slot`,
/// - returns `Err(err)` if it encountered an error and then cleaned `slot`, this means:
/// - `slot` can be deallocated without UB occurring,
@@ -861,10 +861,10 @@ unsafe fn __pinned_init(self, slot: *mut T) -> Result<(), E> {
///
/// # Safety
///
-/// When implementing this type you will need to take great care. Also there are probably very few
+/// When implementing this trait you will need to take great care. Also there are probably very few
/// cases where a manual implementation is necessary. Use [`init_from_closure`] where possible.
///
-/// The [`Init::__init`] function
+/// The [`Init::__init`] function:
/// - returns `Ok(())` if it initialized every field of `slot`,
/// - returns `Err(err)` if it encountered an error and then cleaned `slot`, this means:
/// - `slot` can be deallocated without UB occurring,
@@ -1013,7 +1013,7 @@ pub fn uninit<T, E>() -> impl Init<MaybeUninit<T>, E> {
///
/// ```rust
/// use kernel::{error::Error, init::init_array_from_fn};
-/// let array: Box<[usize; 1_000]>= Box::init::<Error>(init_array_from_fn(|i| i)).unwrap();
+/// let array: Box<[usize; 1_000]> = Box::init::<Error>(init_array_from_fn(|i| i)).unwrap();
/// assert_eq!(array.len(), 1_000);
/// ```
pub fn init_array_from_fn<I, const N: usize, T, E>(
@@ -1027,7 +1027,7 @@ pub fn init_array_from_fn<I, const N: usize, T, E>(
// Counts the number of initialized elements and when dropped drops that many elements from
// `slot`.
let mut init_count = ScopeGuard::new_with_data(0, |i| {
- // We now free every element that has been initialized before:
+ // We now free every element that has been initialized before.
// SAFETY: The loop initialized exactly the values from 0..i and since we
// return `Err` below, the caller will consider the memory at `slot` as
// uninitialized.
@@ -1056,7 +1056,7 @@ pub fn init_array_from_fn<I, const N: usize, T, E>(
///
/// ```rust
/// use kernel::{sync::{Arc, Mutex}, init::pin_init_array_from_fn, new_mutex};
-/// let array: Arc<[Mutex<usize>; 1_000]>=
+/// let array: Arc<[Mutex<usize>; 1_000]> =
/// Arc::pin_init(pin_init_array_from_fn(|i| new_mutex!(i))).unwrap();
/// assert_eq!(array.len(), 1_000);
/// ```
@@ -1071,7 +1071,7 @@ pub fn pin_init_array_from_fn<I, const N: usize, T, E>(
// Counts the number of initialized elements and when dropped drops that many elements from
// `slot`.
let mut init_count = ScopeGuard::new_with_data(0, |i| {
- // We now free every element that has been initialized before:
+ // We now free every element that has been initialized before.
// SAFETY: The loop initialized exactly the values from 0..i and since we
// return `Err` below, the caller will consider the memory at `slot` as
// uninitialized.
diff --git a/rust/kernel/ioctl.rs b/rust/kernel/ioctl.rs
index f1d42ab69972..59050e5f5a5a 100644
--- a/rust/kernel/ioctl.rs
+++ b/rust/kernel/ioctl.rs
@@ -28,13 +28,13 @@ pub const fn _IO(ty: u32, nr: u32) -> u32 {
_IOC(uapi::_IOC_NONE, ty, nr, 0)
}
-/// Build an ioctl number for an read-only ioctl.
+/// Build an ioctl number for a read-only ioctl.
#[inline(always)]
pub const fn _IOR<T>(ty: u32, nr: u32) -> u32 {
_IOC(uapi::_IOC_READ, ty, nr, core::mem::size_of::<T>())
}
-/// Build an ioctl number for an write-only ioctl.
+/// Build an ioctl number for a write-only ioctl.
#[inline(always)]
pub const fn _IOW<T>(ty: u32, nr: u32) -> u32 {
_IOC(uapi::_IOC_WRITE, ty, nr, core::mem::size_of::<T>())
diff --git a/rust/kernel/str.rs b/rust/kernel/str.rs
index 7d848b83add4..0a8569594fc3 100644
--- a/rust/kernel/str.rs
+++ b/rust/kernel/str.rs
@@ -449,7 +449,7 @@ pub(crate) fn pos(&self) -> *mut u8 {
self.pos as _
}
- /// Return the number of bytes written to the formatter.
+ /// Returns the number of bytes written to the formatter.
pub(crate) fn bytes_written(&self) -> usize {
self.pos - self.beg
}
diff --git a/rust/kernel/sync/lock.rs b/rust/kernel/sync/lock.rs
index f12a684bc957..87e111c0da17 100644
--- a/rust/kernel/sync/lock.rs
+++ b/rust/kernel/sync/lock.rs
@@ -21,9 +21,9 @@
/// # Safety
///
/// - Implementers must ensure that only one thread/CPU may access the protected data once the lock
-/// is owned, that is, between calls to `lock` and `unlock`.
+/// is owned, that is, between calls to `lock` and `unlock`.
/// - Implementers must also ensure that `relock` uses the same locking method as the original
-/// lock operation.
+/// lock operation.
pub unsafe trait Backend {
/// The state required by the lock.
type State;
diff --git a/rust/kernel/sync/lock/spinlock.rs b/rust/kernel/sync/lock/spinlock.rs
index 068535ce1b29..e5e0bf621988 100644
--- a/rust/kernel/sync/lock/spinlock.rs
+++ b/rust/kernel/sync/lock/spinlock.rs
@@ -112,7 +112,7 @@ unsafe fn lock(ptr: *mut Self::State) -> Self::GuardState {
unsafe fn unlock(ptr: *mut Self::State, _guard_state: &Self::GuardState) {
// SAFETY: The safety requirements of this function ensure that `ptr` is valid and that the
- // caller is the owner of the mutex.
+ // caller is the owner of the spinlock.
unsafe { bindings::spin_unlock(ptr) }
}
}
diff --git a/rust/kernel/workqueue.rs b/rust/kernel/workqueue.rs
index 498397877376..8775c34d12a5 100644
--- a/rust/kernel/workqueue.rs
+++ b/rust/kernel/workqueue.rs
@@ -253,7 +253,7 @@ fn run(mut this: Pin<Box<Self>>) {
/// actual value of the id is not important as long as you use different ids for different fields
/// of the same struct. (Fields of different structs need not use different ids.)
///
-/// Note that the id is used only to select the right method to call during compilation. It wont be
+/// Note that the id is used only to select the right method to call during compilation. It won't be
/// part of the final executable.
///
/// # Safety
--
2.43.0
next prev parent reply other threads:[~2024-01-23 15:01 UTC|newest]
Thread overview: 16+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2024-01-23 15:00 [PATCH v2 00/12] rust: kernel: documentation improvements Valentin Obst
2024-01-23 15:00 ` Valentin Obst [this message]
2024-01-23 15:00 ` [PATCH v2 02/12] rust: error: improve unsafe code in example Valentin Obst
2024-01-27 15:10 ` Martin Rodriguez Reboredo
2024-01-23 15:00 ` [PATCH v2 03/12] rust: ioctl: end top-level module docs with full stop Valentin Obst
2024-01-23 15:00 ` [PATCH v2 04/12] rust: kernel: add srctree-relative doclinks Valentin Obst
2024-01-23 15:00 ` [PATCH v2 05/12] rust: str: use `NUL` instead of 0 in doc comments Valentin Obst
2024-01-23 16:06 ` [PATCH v2 06/12] rust: str: move SAFETY comment in front of unsafe block Valentin Obst
2024-01-23 16:07 ` [PATCH v2 07/12] rust: kernel: unify spelling of refcount in docs Valentin Obst
2024-01-23 16:09 ` [PATCH v2 08/12] rust: kernel: mark code fragments in docs with backticks Valentin Obst
2024-01-23 16:09 ` [PATCH v2 09/12] rust: kernel: add blank lines in front of code blocks Valentin Obst
2024-01-23 16:10 ` [PATCH v2 10/12] rust: kernel: add doclinks Valentin Obst
2024-01-23 16:10 ` [PATCH v2 11/12] rust: kernel: remove unneeded doclink targets Valentin Obst
2024-01-23 16:10 ` [PATCH v2 12/12] rust: locked_by: shorten doclink preview Valentin Obst
2024-01-30 9:22 ` [PATCH v2 00/12] rust: kernel: documentation improvements Alice Ryhl
2024-01-30 10:44 ` Valentin Obst
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