From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Received: from k57.kb8c70eb.use4.send.mailgun.net (k57.kb8c70eb.use4.send.mailgun.net [204.220.184.57]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES128-GCM-SHA256 (128/128 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by smtp.subspace.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id DE7FF13957E for ; Sat, 24 Jan 2026 00:18:04 +0000 (UTC) Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; arc=none smtp.client-ip=204.220.184.57 ARC-Seal:i=1; a=rsa-sha256; d=subspace.kernel.org; s=arc-20240116; t=1769213886; cv=none; b=sMjivX8n/xNkcIg4FnVxQyEcp9dVvjsfQfEti6shMzWsP/gGD4wLKXbNal5ngKEY4kO4/MgyNXLBvxZOlyGAguChLG3uyWEjllhwxtG9qdYWQG/p701euak9XeAjX0TPlzcg5948tHGytsMNl+EgNAJ3Z/9StrrP8I3nqCJVY+w= ARC-Message-Signature:i=1; a=rsa-sha256; d=subspace.kernel.org; s=arc-20240116; t=1769213886; c=relaxed/simple; bh=fkjDHg5fU7Y8iO7keexwsqOut5TtuHTpncwdypVBTso=; h=From:To:Cc:Subject:Date:Message-ID:MIME-Version; b=ZeBoDLV1JaGhsvCyQJFpqVh3OHL1gojkGuVyRG992SPRbMrbEPzceNcQj/4civyFkyYUaL8VyGvcuW8A+vMul4m3mkckx3AHFvaMesy0aT7Mq2ru4Q14in45nSqFCYhLY/lyFrYshebBen2DWA2bV1OjoLoezRTdEpmUsW8YpOU= ARC-Authentication-Results:i=1; smtp.subspace.kernel.org; dmarc=pass (p=reject dis=none) header.from=yodel.dev; spf=pass smtp.mailfrom=yodel.dev; dkim=pass (2048-bit key) header.d=yodel.dev header.i=@yodel.dev header.b=BRT5Xidd; arc=none smtp.client-ip=204.220.184.57 Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; dmarc=pass (p=reject dis=none) header.from=yodel.dev Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; spf=pass smtp.mailfrom=yodel.dev Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; dkim=pass (2048-bit key) header.d=yodel.dev header.i=@yodel.dev header.b="BRT5Xidd" X-Mailgun-Sid: WyI2Y2U4MiIsInZpcnRpby1jb21tZW50QGxpc3RzLmxpbnV4LmRldiIsIjk3NjA3ZSJd Received: from mail.yodel.dev (mail.yodel.dev [35.209.39.246]) by c28334f172dfb2b7305e8c426211204d93762a3a63414144eaaf84002b0bfe9e with SMTP id 69740fbb9cedc9a4219f7720; Sat, 24 Jan 2026 00:18:03 GMT X-Mailgun-Sending-Ip: 204.220.184.57 DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=yodel.dev; s=rsa2048; t=1769213883; bh=2BTP1kVTXjb/aRK1fA6nRq7NIGAZ8+HybiCS2eA1hSY=; h=X-Mailgun-Dkim:From:To:Cc:Subject:Date:Message-ID:MIME-Version: Content-Transfer-Encoding:From:Reply-to:Subject:Date:Message-id:To: Cc:Mime-version:Content-type:Content-transfer-encoding:In-reply-to: References; b=BRT5XiddNjB2DLnhPy9X1+N0a4CtPZEPC+usaByOklDvBjvjMnMJK7iU+4b8v5pij GNL0XgUAjr2DjifPg+cOEuDsvE1+TpLhUQdS6NdRSwDHqipKrEaXP2JuT6JbHmZWBp l4R2xspVTWP9cSrC/EMThsdD0LvCyIsZwnQPulA5WOV2FZfygTnMxvxzeCNp9jjtl0 LihxsAK5xrm4xZFQNtZ6hjbHrNPKTw8E5ORfeQTNzstJqRRctC1NwhmrbZrzazU0og zouBK9BPsB5sMeqXv1HGMuJrAE7Q43XdAMHSeLcon0MrQLRgbYywxQZlLR7Mu/Bpab q0Y5IEEC3gWfA== X-Mailgun-Dkim: no X-Mailgun-Dkim: no From: Yodel Eldar To: virtio-comment@lists.linux.dev Cc: Yodel Eldar Subject: [PATCH] packed-ring.tex: Add comma and remove redundancy to improve readability Date: Fri, 23 Jan 2026 18:17:40 -0600 Message-ID: <20260124001740.34803-1-yodel.eldar@yodel.dev> Precedence: bulk X-Mailing-List: virtio-comment@lists.linux.dev List-Id: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit A comma after "set" separates the prepositional phrase from the main clause where both the prepositional object and subject of the main clause are long descriptor flags, thereby improving readability. Also, the second "is" refers to the same subject as the first and is, therefore, redundant. Eliminating it improves the flow of the sentence. Signed-off-by: Yodel Eldar --- packed-ring.tex | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/packed-ring.tex b/packed-ring.tex index 3ee55a1..f0b0cdd 100644 --- a/packed-ring.tex +++ b/packed-ring.tex @@ -271,8 +271,8 @@ \subsection{Indirect Flag: Scatter-Gather Support} are reserved and are ignored by the device. Buffer ID is also reserved and is ignored by the device. -In descriptors with VIRTQ_DESC_F_INDIRECT set VIRTQ_DESC_F_WRITE -is reserved and is ignored by the device. +In descriptors with VIRTQ_DESC_F_INDIRECT set, VIRTQ_DESC_F_WRITE +is reserved and ignored by the device. \subsection{In-order use of descriptors} \label{sec:Packed Virtqueues / In-order use of descriptors} -- 2.52.0