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b=mM1MmixoH68pbNiAXJycnQtTEeaPFCUPUoB+GZpt9547zsYusm/yMT9IgTdypw2Un ZBu6oW11WvFBctxkQ9r9U0nE+i0JoF/FsCCYdNFPKqgQWoCVw+3nvSyowzRtIxdIVC 4ZwTJA4xAp4n5FSsoqU9jP9AqvlVFqXzkDp3W63INSFFotBWKAVJNSFOUy7zmlTvXO nuTdgLOVGKUZN7d3e6lRziBkF9A2kcVBjcrNxLS16k3BLPYURoe1xP+xoj9oT1rz41 AdfUZOINoJtz9giy7YSM1s84r+HHDY5IQCkxrEItZFa763FeuKk95RO8niShmBt5n7 PG6c/k1JR9eQg== From: SJ Park To: Aveline Noir Cc: SJ Park , Jonathan Corbet , Shuah Khan , Randy Dunlap , Manuel Ebner , damon@lists.linux.dev, linux-mm@kvack.org, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org Subject: Re: [PATCH 5/8] Docs/mm/damon/design: fix grammar and typos Date: Mon, 26 Oct 2026 07:54:16 -0700 Message-ID: <20261026145417.150739-1-sj@kernel.org> X-Mailer: git-send-email 2.47.3 In-Reply-To: <179301327249.2.12612582132957329203.damon-docs-grammar-5@gmail.com> References: X-Archived-By: MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-Rspamd-Server: rspam12 X-Rspamd-Queue-Id: C17F520009 X-Stat-Signature: e84ijpeupahjfdhi74k4wm8ghxhnymjq X-Spam-Status: No, score=-14.1 required=3.0 tests=BAYES_00,DKIMWL_WL_HIGH, DKIM_SIGNED,DKIM_VALID,DKIM_VALID_AU,HEADER_FROM_DIFFERENT_DOMAINS, INCLUDES_CR_TRAILER,MAILING_LIST_MULTI,SPF_HELO_PASS,SPF_PASS, USER_AGENT_GIT autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no version=4.0.1 X-Rspam-User: X-HE-Tag: 1793026465-751692 X-HE-Meta: U2FsdGVkX19hH78aOhwkDU1rTAOvru76t0OCc1nZ6ZE1AbZjtuVytV+ZSkDfirPNT5yrtqC0quNCnBuNQJEjZShl70zv3oyYuZZ1t5TeD4lWP5aksnGptiDqo4XJ6XKIZXyzzMuBC8y1dGSKOs5hBPf7kkaUMGRQ85erSQoJVZvnr+CwBfhZlkPEYryYHlRDjNmzdLYc6zQcDBN1xpmk90PE/qeGSBXl6JbCv9cF5+ghNTfSic61Pk3RuyHSqgcDBw2SID0hvLqAeM1vXm1g89/Knh2HtgTNmvAO5AokKAXk2lI+MUVi8Q+mR3z5EcS/gzu7VrvYsHUURJqpiLuidZdFNVY4/sQCOfuLFwoJyhjeBVsSs+10PRih0a4Ww5CPdkq4GYd+zSX8149omihts10NKNr1kFRlk1RA72bh4tsy3tWc9jshEXbHUccUdqggPVMoyg+5c0UIEcw6p85Dwgn3//qiF7m9oIrKBa8H1Y74UkJceBypaxkafT2sUN7/4FPdINmP8wc3fzfwGr+BLt9vZHZQ65zroshG0UzBi0TXOEl31JeMcFL9Qg0tejANM3CeMTxDhPB7XjFDBBrO+UhTK1oF9q+VEQO4pr9Bo50y5NaSGZtv45AUJXTOCMe19Fi0v6kMs605ZW5fILR17iBXsuzYFIN4SoCT5+0vDwRQQ4WCTUUSV6+bYD5KK3i+oPZ8AHISNfQtzgxklggOSFV1arSK1QeX9oR1VOe4us3sma+Zl4uxhyJkcQdViJauBZkysnl+BZlbzdBkznL68oIQGp0QnYHJG96lEjP3NZkzJjRxnQ8TTvWlOtXR6kLMET7SKIarOHT10it3AUNHF9J4Y7sR0VY6p99hI9A8/SXp2fmGfeTlsOq3Hn6F9K9QBYtMg9a15YkWHDobemTtFDwjCPqS0VLHeDzzvk+sh/ImlruBUGWJLJxxK3b4uZnvpa8EtJAtD3BTXD8uhwK /kcRppHR 1U/gHPWf3NOFZLFHjIbdPNxhSVT0uYlMR17K4baxr2u/c9OmHFRJWy/BpJ9WToyK4Ahgj10aQeKtZN6jHPSYzbswUkG2+HgMuYZ4qT2EtQxh94ScCvKa9Gvl/IyWU56hdLynRCJirejlRLczoRR8L+7VQRxmaUoOKqMppYTverLZaWax6gEtVDkx5Pklv447mMMSEusuNWmqOM3h1X3GFMgawOZ7t26fxg6PXUcl3Wkgyn614f7tPQOA4uQAbjRvRv66K Sender: owner-linux-mm@kvack.org Precedence: bulk X-Loop: owner-majordomo@kvack.org List-ID: List-Subscribe: X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 4.0.1 (2024-03-26) on aws-us-west-2-korg-listserv-alma10-1 On Mon, 26 Oct 2026 22:14:37 +1100 Aveline Noir wrote: > The design doc has quite a few relative clauses that seem to have lost > their verb, like "pages that assumed to have" or "filters that handled > by the core layer". Fix those, along with some agreement issues and a > couple of typos: "Parreto", and "Use space", which I think should be > "User space". Rewrap where the lines got too long. > > Signed-off-by: Aveline Noir Reviewed-by: SJ Park Thanks, SJ [...]