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From: SJ Park <sj@kernel.org>
To: Andrew Morton <akpm@linux-foundation.org>
Cc: Aveline Noir <jm5905938@gmail.com>,
	Jonathan Corbet <corbet@lwn.net>,
	Randy Dunlap <rdunlap@infradead.org>, SJ Park <sj@kernel.org>,
	Shuah Khan <skhan@linuxfoundation.org>,
	damon@lists.linux.dev, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org,
	linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, linux-mm@kvack.org,
	Manuel Ebner <manuelebnerli@mailbox.org>
Subject: [PATCH v2 2/8] Docs/admin-guide/mm/damon/stat: fix pronoun agreement
Date: Mon,  2 Nov 2026 16:59:32 -0800	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <20261103005940.91432-3-sj@kernel.org> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20261103005940.91432-1-sj@kernel.org>

From: Aveline Noir <jm5905938@gmail.com>

"converts it" refers to the access events, so I think it should be
"them".  Rewrap the paragraph while at it.

Cc: Jonathan Corbet <corbet@lwn.net>
Cc: Shuah Khan <skhan@linuxfoundation.org>
Cc: Randy Dunlap <rdunlap@infradead.org>
Suggested-by: Manuel Ebner <manuelebnerli@mailbox.org>
Signed-off-by: Aveline Noir <jm5905938@gmail.com>
Reviewed-by: Manuel Ebner <manuelebnerli@mailbox.org>
Reviewed-by: SJ Park <sj@kernel.org>
Signed-off-by: SJ Park <sj@kernel.org>
---
 Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/stat.rst | 12 ++++++------
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/stat.rst b/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/stat.rst
index 4a9db755a5265..7151ac118081d 100644
--- a/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/stat.rst
+++ b/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/stat.rst
@@ -41,8 +41,8 @@ enabled
 
 Enable or disable DAMON_STAT.
 
-You can enable DAMON_STAT by setting the value of this parameter as ``Y``.
-Setting it as ``N`` disables DAMON_STAT.  The default value is set by
+You can enable DAMON_STAT by setting the value of this parameter to ``Y``.
+Setting it to ``N`` disables DAMON_STAT.  The default value is set by
 ``CONFIG_DAMON_STAT_ENABLED_DEFAULT`` build config option.
 
 Note that this module (damon_stat) cannot run simultaneously with other
@@ -68,10 +68,10 @@ estimated_memory_bandwidth
 Estimated memory bandwidth consumption (bytes per second) of the system.
 
 DAMON_STAT reads observed access events on the current DAMON results snapshot
-and converts it to memory bandwidth consumption estimation in bytes per second.
-The resulting metric is exposed to user via this read-only parameter.  Because
-DAMON uses sampling, this is only an estimation of the access intensity rather
-than accurate memory bandwidth.
+and converts them to memory bandwidth consumption estimation in bytes per
+second.  The resulting metric is exposed to user via this read-only parameter.
+Because DAMON uses sampling, this is only an estimation of the access intensity
+rather than accurate memory bandwidth.
 
 memory_idle_ms_percentiles
 --------------------------
-- 
2.47.3

  parent reply	other threads:[~2026-11-03  0:59 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 17+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2026-11-03  0:59 [PATCH v2 0/8] Docs: damon: fix grammar and typos SJ Park
2026-11-03  0:59 ` [PATCH v2 1/8] Docs/admin-guide/mm/damon/start: fix grammar SJ Park
2026-11-03  1:01   ` sashiko-bot
2026-11-03  0:59 ` SJ Park [this message]
2026-11-03  1:01   ` [PATCH v2 2/8] Docs/admin-guide/mm/damon/stat: fix pronoun agreement sashiko-bot
2026-11-03  0:59 ` [PATCH v2 3/8] Docs/admin-guide/mm/damon/usage: fix grammar SJ Park
2026-11-03  1:01   ` sashiko-bot
2026-11-03  0:59 ` [PATCH v2 4/8] Docs/admin-guide/mm/damon/lru_sort: fix remaining grammar SJ Park
2026-11-03  1:02   ` sashiko-bot
2026-11-03  0:59 ` [PATCH v2 5/8] Docs/mm/damon/design: fix grammar and typos SJ Park
2026-11-03  1:01   ` sashiko-bot
2026-11-03  0:59 ` [PATCH v2 6/8] Docs/mm/damon/api: fix verb form SJ Park
2026-11-03  1:01   ` sashiko-bot
2026-11-03  0:59 ` [PATCH v2 7/8] Docs/mm/damon/maintainer-profile: fix subject-verb agreement SJ Park
2026-11-03  1:01   ` sashiko-bot
2026-11-03  0:59 ` [PATCH v2 8/8] Docs/mm/damon/monitoring_intervals_tuning_example: fix grammar and typos SJ Park
2026-11-03  1:01   ` sashiko-bot

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