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Date: Sat, 27 Oct 2007 17:36:06 +0100
From: Till Kamppeter <till.kamppeter@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [Printing-architecture] Second version of slides for Tokyo
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To: Ira McDonald <blueroofmusic@gmail.com>
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Ira McDonald wrote:
> Very good!  I carefully read all of your slides this morning.
> 
> They are a wonderful distillation of the long HTML summary I wrote
> about the Open Printing Summit in Montreal.
> 
> They are also still *much* too long to cover in 90 minutes in Tokyo,
> so you'll have to skip over some of the slides quickly.
> 
> A few edits:
> - Page 16 - "expecially" --> "especially"
> - Page 17 - break top bullet into two lines about Mac OS X versions
> - Page 18 - "Port monitor MIB"  --> "PWG 5107.1 Port Monitor MIB"
>   (to emphasize that this is an open standard, not a vendor MIB)
> - Page 18 - last line - change "PCK" to "PCL"
> 
> Thanks for your hard work.  Good luck in Tokyo this coming week.

Thank you very much for your proofreading. I have re-uploaded the files 
with your proposed corrections applied.

    Till