Re: [RFC] Multiboot ammendment: non-VBE video

[Isaac Dupree <ml@isaac.cedarswampstudios.org>]

Robert Millan wrote:
>> In this case color_info is defined as following:
> 
> I'd appreciate if a native English speaker confirms this, but I believe
> this should say "as follows" (same for the other instances of this
> construct).

"as follows" reads naturally to me, as a native speaker (also checked: 
online dictionaries mention the phrase "as follows" without saying it's 
specific to my area -- northeast U.S. -- so I think it's right to use)

>> +@samp{framebuffer_palette_addr} contains address of array of @samp{framebuffer_palette_num_colors} following structures:
> 
> There seems to be some word missing here.

"the following structures"?
"as follows" would also work well if "structures" isn't an important 
word to keep?
wait, it's like saying "array of 3 following structures", each of the 
same type. hmm. "@samp{framebuffer_palette_num_colors} structures as 
follows"?

-Isaac