Re: [Qemu-devel] [PATCH] Fix some wording in qemu.1

[Stefan Weil <weil@mail.berlios.de>]

Am 17.04.2011 03:25, schrieb Dan Church:
> Yeah, sorry about that. I pressed 'p' in Vim in the wrong place.
> Here's the final patch:
>
> --- qemu/qemu.1.orig 2011-04-16 14:33:06.000000000 -0500
> +++ qemu/qemu.1 2011-04-16 14:56:56.000000000 -0500
> @@ -271,11 +271,11 @@
> Available types are: ide, scsi, sd, mtd, floppy, pflash, virtio.
> .IP "\fBbus=\fR\fIbus\fR\fB,unit=\fR\fIunit\fR" 4
> .IX Item "bus=bus,unit=unit"
> -These options define where is connected the drive by defining the bus
> number and
> +These options define where the drive is connected by defining the bus
> number and
> the unit id.
> .IP "\fBindex=\fR\fIindex\fR" 4
> .IX Item "index=index"
> -This option defines where is connected the drive by using an index in 
> the list
> +This option defines where the drive is connected by using an index in 
> the list
> of available connectors of a given interface type.
> .IP "\fBmedia=\fR\fImedia\fR" 4
> .IX Item "media=media"
> @@ -376,10 +376,10 @@
> incremented:
> .Sp
> .Vb 1
> -\& qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b"
> +\& qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b
> .Ve
> .Sp
> -is interpreted like:
> +is interpreted as:
> .Sp
> .Vb 1
> \& qemu \-hda a \-hdb b
>
>
> On Sat, Apr 16, 2011 at 15:25, Stefan Weil <weil@mail.berlios.de> wrote:
>> Am 16.04.2011 21:38, schrieb Dan Church:
>>>
>>> It was apparent that some parts of the man page were written by
>>> non-native English speaker(s), so I figured I'd help out somewhat:
>>>
>>> --- qemu/qemu.1.orig    2011-04-16 14:33:06.000000000 -0500
>>> +++ qemu/qemu.1 2011-04-16 14:36:38.000000000 -0500
>>> @@ -271,11 +271,11 @@
>>>  Available types are: ide, scsi, sd, mtd, floppy, pflash, virtio.
>>>  .IP "\fBbus=\fR\fIbus\fR\fB,unit=\fR\fIunit\fR" 4
>>>  .IX Item "bus=bus,unit=unit"
>>> -These options define where is connected the drive by defining the bus
>>> number and
>>> +These options define where the drive by is connected defining the bus
>>> number and
>>>
>>
>> ... where the drive is connected by defining ...? See also next change.
>>
>> The other changes look good.
>>
>>>  the unit id.
>>>  .IP "\fBindex=\fR\fIindex\fR" 4
>>>  .IX Item "index=index"
>>> -This option defines where is connected the drive by using an index 
>>> in the
>>> list
>>> +This option defines where the drive is connected by using an index 
>>> in the
>>> list
>>>  of available connectors of a given interface type.
>>>  .IP "\fBmedia=\fR\fImedia\fR" 4
>>>  .IX Item "media=media"
>>> @@ -376,10 +376,10 @@
>>>  incremented:
>>>  .Sp
>>>  .Vb 1
>>> -\&         qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b"
>>> +\&         qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b
>>>  .Ve
>>>  .Sp
>>> -is interpreted like:
>>> +is interpreted as:
>>>  .Sp
>>>  .Vb 1
>>>  \&         qemu \-hda a \-hdb b

Could you please add a "Signed-off-by" signature and send the patch with 
"git send-email"?

Thanks,
Stefan W.