From: Zhang Yanfei <zhangyanfei.yes@gmail.com>
To: fujita.tomonori@lab.ntt.co.jp
Cc: stgt@vger.kernel.org, Zhang Yanfei <zhangyanfei@cn.fujitsu.com>
Subject: [PATCH] doc/iscsi: typo fix in doc/README.iscsi
Date: Sat, 18 Jan 2014 10:59:28 +0800 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <52D9EE10.7020001@gmail.com> (raw)
From: Zhang Yanfei <zhangyanfei@cn.fujitsu.com>
Signed-off-by: Zhang Yanfei <zhangyanfei@cn.fujitsu.com>
---
doc/README.iscsi | 8 ++++----
1 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
diff --git a/doc/README.iscsi b/doc/README.iscsi
index 4ff3028..9fc21dd 100644
--- a/doc/README.iscsi
+++ b/doc/README.iscsi
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ The following example creates a target with id 1 (the iqn is
iqn.2001-04.com.example:storage.disk2.amiens.sys1.xyz) and adds a
logical unit (backed by /dev/hdc1) with lun 1.
-Let's create one target devce.
+Let's create one target device.
host:~/tgt$ su
host:~/tgt# ./usr/tgtadm --lld iscsi --op new --mode target --tid 1 -T iqn.2001-04.com.example:storage.disk2.amiens.sys1.xyz
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ Note "ACL information" section. "ALL" means that this target accepts
any initiators. The ACL feature also provides the access control based
on initiators' addresses.
-First, let's remove "ALL" options:
+First, let's remove "ALL" option:
host:~/tgt# ./usr/tgtadm --lld iscsi --op unbind --mode target --tid 1 -I ALL
host:~/tgt# ./usr/tgtadm --lld iscsi --op show --mode target
@@ -224,12 +224,12 @@ IFMarkInt=Reject
MaxConnections=1
-You can chage iSCSI parameters like the folloing (e.g. set
+You can change iSCSI parameters like the following (e.g. set
MaxRecvDataSegmentLength to 16384):
host:~/tgt# ./usr/tgtadm --lld iscsi --mode target --op update --tid 1 --name MaxRecvDataSegmentLength --value 16384
-You can get iSCSI parameters again to see it change:
+You can get iSCSI parameters again to see its change:
host:~/tgt# ./usr/tgtadm --lld iscsi --op show --mode target --tid 1
MaxRecvDataSegmentLength=16384
--
1.7.1
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2014-01-18 2:59 Zhang Yanfei [this message]
2014-01-18 3:17 ` [PATCH] doc/iscsi: typo fix in doc/README.iscsi FUJITA Tomonori
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