From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 From: Ben Aveling Subject: Re: [PATCH] wording fixes in the user manual and glossary Date: Mon, 26 May 2014 18:11:43 +1000 Message-ID: <5382F73F.2010704@optusnet.com.au> References: <1400989841-2845-1-git-send-email-jmmahler@gmail.com> <5381A239.2060809@gmail.com> <20140525083720.GA28739@hudson.localdomain> <5382F237.8070909@gmail.com> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit To: Chris Packham , Jeremiah Mahler , git@vger.kernel.org X-From: git-owner@vger.kernel.org Mon May 26 10:37:34 2014 Return-path: Envelope-to: gcvg-git-2@plane.gmane.org Received: from vger.kernel.org ([209.132.180.67]) by plane.gmane.org with esmtp (Exim 4.69) (envelope-from ) id 1WoqPV-0001zE-BB for gcvg-git-2@plane.gmane.org; Mon, 26 May 2014 10:37:33 +0200 Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S1751818AbaEZIh0 (ORCPT ); Mon, 26 May 2014 04:37:26 -0400 Received: from mail108.syd.optusnet.com.au ([211.29.132.59]:35006 "EHLO mail108.syd.optusnet.com.au" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S1751782AbaEZIhX (ORCPT ); Mon, 26 May 2014 04:37:23 -0400 X-Greylist: delayed 1531 seconds by postgrey-1.27 at vger.kernel.org; Mon, 26 May 2014 04:37:22 EDT Received: from [192.168.1.100] (pa49-187-82-204.pa.nsw.optusnet.com.au [49.187.82.204]) (Authenticated sender: bena.001@optusnet.com.au) by mail108.syd.optusnet.com.au (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id D33851A21DE; Mon, 26 May 2014 18:11:48 +1000 (EST) User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (Windows NT 6.1; WOW64; rv:24.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/24.5.0 In-Reply-To: <5382F237.8070909@gmail.com> X-Optus-CM-Score: 0 X-Optus-CM-Analysis: v=2.1 cv=U6SrU4bu c=1 sm=1 tr=0 a=lIDko9ucPWq552HzaZbNuw==:117 a=lIDko9ucPWq552HzaZbNuw==:17 a=PO7r1zJSAAAA:8 a=0n_1n4a9CTgA:10 a=Cd038zgwAPkA:10 a=8nJEP1OIZ-IA:10 a=5H5q9Kh-Bt8sa-7DpvkA:9 a=wPNLvfGTeEIA:10 a=QqBBuEG8G2gA:10 a=AbQT9EcZu0oA:10 Sender: git-owner@vger.kernel.org Precedence: bulk List-ID: X-Mailing-List: git@vger.kernel.org Archived-At: On 25/05/14 20:37, Jeremiah Mahler wrote: >> How about this: >> >> Eventually the upstream developer will do additional work in their >> repository. Creating new commits and advancing the branches to point >> at the new commits. > The second sentence needs a verb. Maybe something along the lines of "When they ${do_X}, ${Y} will happen" ? Regards, Ben