On Wed, Oct 7, 2015 at 3:50 PM, Otavio Salvador <otavio@ossystems.com.br> wrote:

The driver source code provided by Freescale need fixes to properly

s/need/needs

I would drop the "properly work" completely.

work. This forks the code to a more community driven development,

I would drop "a more" and would keep only "This fork is a community
driven source code"

allowing for a faster development of the driver and easier integration

and allow a faster development and easier integration of fixes.

of fixes.

To allow visual identification, when checking for bug reports, the
'+fslc' suffix is added to the module.

Maybe:
"The "+fslc" suffix is added to the module during < puts here where I
can see +fslc > to make a clear identification."

I would not say "visual" as a script is not "visual".

Signed-off-by: Otavio Salvador <otavio@ossystems.com.br>
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Changes in v2:
- New patch

(...)

+
+SUMMARY = "Kernel loadable module for Vivante GPU"
+DESCRIPTION = "Provides flexibility to switch graphics between different kernels in future \
+releases. This package uses same source code as GPU kernel driver source."

Replace by something like:

"This package uses an exact copy of GPU kernel driver source code of
same version"

"This package uses an exact copy of the GPU kernel driver source code of
the same version"

Daiane