From: Andrew Cooper <andrew.cooper3@citrix.com>
To: Juergen Gross <jgross@suse.com>,
Konrad Rzeszutek Wilk <konrad.wilk@oracle.com>
Cc: xen-devel@lists.xenproject.org, ian.jackson@eu.citrix.com,
jbeulich@suse.com, stefano.stabellini@eu.citrix.com
Subject: Re: [PATCH] docs: add misc/qemu-backends.txt
Date: Fri, 8 Apr 2016 19:27:44 +0100 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <5707F820.6010708@citrix.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <5707F665.4050502@suse.com>
>>> +Xenstore the backend information is presented there. <qemu> is built
>> That looks to be missing an verb, no it has a verb, something is off with
>> that.
>>
>> XenStore presents the backend information there?
> No, qemu is presenting the information in Xenstore.
"Xenstore" is not the start of the sentence - it follows on from the
previous line, but even as a native English speaker it took me a while
to figure out.
A comma should be present (i.e. "As $FOO, $BAR relating to $FOO"), and
it would aid clarity.
+As each qemu instance owns a path (named "<qemu>" from now on) in
+Xenstore, the backend information is presented there. <qemu> is built
~Andrew
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next prev parent reply other threads:[~2016-04-08 18:27 UTC|newest]
Thread overview: 10+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2016-04-07 6:24 [PATCH] docs: add misc/qemu-backends.txt Juergen Gross
2016-04-08 14:54 ` Konrad Rzeszutek Wilk
2016-04-08 18:20 ` Juergen Gross
2016-04-08 18:27 ` Andrew Cooper [this message]
2016-04-11 5:01 ` Juergen Gross
2016-04-10 20:00 ` Stefano Stabellini
2016-04-11 4:52 ` Juergen Gross
2016-04-11 10:33 ` Wei Liu
2016-04-11 10:57 ` Juergen Gross
2016-04-11 12:05 ` Wei Liu
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