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[106.167.137.155]) by smtp.gmail.com with ESMTPSA id 98e67ed59e1d1-38fb2b0f82csm1724419a91.2.2026.08.02.03.34.29 (version=TLS1_3 cipher=TLS_AES_128_GCM_SHA256 bits=128/128); Sun, 02 Aug 2026 03:34:30 -0700 (PDT) Message-ID: <5ae8a9a4-21aa-4714-8520-78dcbf05d41f@gmail.com> Date: Sun, 2 Aug 2026 19:34:28 +0900 Precedence: bulk X-Mailing-List: perfbook@vger.kernel.org List-Id: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: MIME-Version: 1.0 User-Agent: Mozilla Thunderbird Subject: [PATCH -perfbook 2/2] toosloftrade: Fix up sentence structure To: "Paul E. McKenney" Cc: perfbook@vger.kernel.org, Akira Yokosawa References: <277da031-ffc7-4b19-a632-5e3ba7d5dbec@gmail.com> Content-Language: en-US From: Akira Yokosawa In-Reply-To: <277da031-ffc7-4b19-a632-5e3ba7d5dbec@gmail.com> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Signed off by: Akira Yokosawa --- I think this is what you wanted to say. -- toolsoftrade/toolsoftrade.tex | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/toolsoftrade/toolsoftrade.tex b/toolsoftrade/toolsoftrade.tex index d6146b47..ce32a35f 100644 --- a/toolsoftrade/toolsoftrade.tex +++ b/toolsoftrade/toolsoftrade.tex @@ -2243,7 +2243,7 @@ with a check, as shown on \clnrefrange{B5}{B6}. Although this transformation is often desirable, it could be problematic if the actual store was required for ordering. For example, if \co{do_something_with()} contained a write memory barrier -(Linux kernel \apik{smp_wmb()}) would order the store, but not the +(Linux kernel \apik{smp_wmb()}), it would order the store but not the check load. This situation might suggest use of \apik{smp_store_release()} over \apik{smp_wmb()}. -- 2.43.0