From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: Sender: List-Post: List-Help: List-Unsubscribe: List-Subscribe: From: Cornelia Huck In-Reply-To: <20230209071430-mutt-send-email-mst@kernel.org> References: <20230209014108.209950-1-parav@nvidia.com> <20230209071430-mutt-send-email-mst@kernel.org> Date: Thu, 09 Feb 2023 13:29:57 +0100 Message-ID: <877cwr6myi.fsf@redhat.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Subject: [virtio-dev] Re: [PATCH v3] virtio-net: Improve introductory description Content-Type: text/plain To: "Michael S. Tsirkin" , Parav Pandit Cc: virtio-dev@lists.oasis-open.org, virtio-comment@lists.oasis-open.org, shahafs@nvidia.com List-ID: On Thu, Feb 09 2023, "Michael S. Tsirkin" wrote: > On Thu, Feb 09, 2023 at 03:41:08AM +0200, Parav Pandit wrote: >> @@ -389,8 +392,8 @@ \subsection{Device Operation}\label{sec:Device Types / Network Device / Device O >> }; >> \end{lstlisting} >> >> -The controlq is used to control device features such as >> -filtering. >> +The controlq is used to control many device features described further in > > many seems subjective. > > s/many/some of the/ ? s/many/various/ instead? That section should cover all of the device features controled via the control vq. > >> +section \ref{sec:Device Types / Network Device / Device Operation / Control Virtqueue}. --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: virtio-dev-unsubscribe@lists.oasis-open.org For additional commands, e-mail: virtio-dev-help@lists.oasis-open.org