From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 X-GM-THRID: 6397271096211537920 X-Received: by 10.237.59.39 with SMTP id p36mr6115454qte.34.1489494047285; Tue, 14 Mar 2017 05:20:47 -0700 (PDT) X-BeenThere: outreachy-kernel@googlegroups.com Received: by 10.157.54.4 with SMTP id w4ls5009392otb.8.gmail; Tue, 14 Mar 2017 05:20:46 -0700 (PDT) X-Received: by 10.157.14.74 with SMTP id n10mr16573469otd.34.1489494046944; Tue, 14 Mar 2017 05:20:46 -0700 (PDT) Received: by 10.202.96.85 with SMTP id u82msoib; Tue, 14 Mar 2017 04:22:18 -0700 (PDT) X-Received: by 10.13.221.140 with SMTP id g134mr20439984ywe.55.1489490538348; Tue, 14 Mar 2017 04:22:18 -0700 (PDT) Return-Path: Received: from mga09.intel.com (mga09.intel.com. [134.134.136.24]) by gmr-mx.google.com with ESMTPS id r66si3590999pfb.7.2017.03.14.04.22.18 for (version=TLS1_2 cipher=ECDHE-RSA-AES128-GCM-SHA256 bits=128/128); Tue, 14 Mar 2017 04:22:18 -0700 (PDT) Received-SPF: pass (google.com: domain of jani.nikula@intel.com designates 134.134.136.24 as permitted sender) client-ip=134.134.136.24; Authentication-Results: gmr-mx.google.com; dkim=temperror (no key for signature) header.i=@intel.com; spf=pass (google.com: domain of jani.nikula@intel.com designates 134.134.136.24 as permitted sender) smtp.mailfrom=jani.nikula@intel.com DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=simple/simple; d=intel.com; i=@intel.com; q=dns/txt; s=intel; t=1489490538; x=1521026538; h=from:to:cc:subject:in-reply-to:references:date: message-id:mime-version; bh=UVnW5QgSy8wN3QXTUo8E1ub2aHs0JCTnpfqSJ+3YM7o=; b=oS1K+GAkHWO3BgnqmJnRP0XWEjL1rRHcoeSm/pEZAfvvVRVCPYhzFCwX LdblmZFYOdS7kYAZzOgfXT32C3J6EA==; Received: from fmsmga003.fm.intel.com ([10.253.24.29]) by orsmga102.jf.intel.com with ESMTP/TLS/DHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384; 14 Mar 2017 04:22:17 -0700 X-ExtLoop1: 1 X-IronPort-AV: E=Sophos;i="5.36,163,1486454400"; d="scan'208";a="834400441" Received: from jnikula-mobl.fi.intel.com (HELO localhost) ([10.237.72.162]) by FMSMGA003.fm.intel.com with ESMTP; 14 Mar 2017 04:22:14 -0700 From: Jani Nikula To: Julia Lawall , Tamara Diaconita Cc: linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, corbet@lwn.net, outreachy-kernel@googlegroups.com, Tamara Diaconita Subject: Re: [Outreachy kernel] [PATCH] Documentation: x86: Fix typos In-Reply-To: Organization: Intel Finland Oy - BIC 0357606-4 - Westendinkatu 7, 02160 Espoo References: <20170314083902.4491-1-diaconita.tamara@gmail.com> Date: Tue, 14 Mar 2017 13:22:14 +0200 Message-ID: <877f3sdrx5.fsf@intel.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain On Tue, 14 Mar 2017, Julia Lawall wrote: > On Tue, 14 Mar 2017, Tamara Diaconita wrote: > >> Fix typos in x86 directory. >> Make documentation clear and grammatically correct. >> >> Signed-off-by: Tamara Diaconita >> --- >> Documentation/x86/boot.txt | 4 ++-- >> 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) >> >> diff --git a/Documentation/x86/boot.txt b/Documentation/x86/boot.txt >> index 5e9b826..694979a 100644 >> --- a/Documentation/x86/boot.txt >> +++ b/Documentation/x86/boot.txt >> @@ -336,7 +336,7 @@ Type: read >> Offset/size: 0x20e/2 >> Protocol: 2.00+ >> >> - If set to a nonzero value, contains a pointer to a NUL-terminated >> + If set to a nonzero value, contains a pointer to a NULL-terminated >> human-readable kernel version number string, less 0x200. This can >> be used to display the kernel version to the user. This value >> should be less than (0x200*setup_sects). >> @@ -1105,7 +1105,7 @@ address of the struct boot_params. >> >> **** EFI HANDOVER PROTOCOL >> >> -This protocol allows boot loaders to defer initialisation to the EFI >> +This protocol allows boot loaders to defer initialization to the EFI > > This is an American vs British English issue. I don't know if the Linux > kernel prefers one or the other. We prefer they are best left as they are! http://marc.info/?i=20170313082328.06d0ccbf@lwn.net BR, Jani. > > julia > >> boot stub. The boot loader is required to load the kernel/initrd(s) >> from the boot media and jump to the EFI handover protocol entry point >> which is hdr->handover_offset bytes from the beginning of >> -- >> 2.9.3 >> >> -- >> You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "outreachy-kernel" group. >> To unsubscribe from this group and stop receiving emails from it, send an email to outreachy-kernel+unsubscribe@googlegroups.com. >> To post to this group, send email to outreachy-kernel@googlegroups.com. >> To view this discussion on the web visit https://groups.google.com/d/msgid/outreachy-kernel/20170314083902.4491-1-diaconita.tamara%40gmail.com. >> For more options, visit https://groups.google.com/d/optout. >> > -- > To unsubscribe from this list: send the line "unsubscribe linux-doc" in > the body of a message to majordomo@vger.kernel.org > More majordomo info at http://vger.kernel.org/majordomo-info.html -- Jani Nikula, Intel Open Source Technology Center