Re: [PATCH v2] docs/mm: Physical Memory: add example of interleaving nodes

[Mike Rapoport <rppt@kernel.org>]

On Sun, Feb 12, 2023 at 11:50:08AM +0000, Matthew Wilcox wrote:
> On Sun, Feb 12, 2023 at 11:54:45AM +0200, Mike Rapoport wrote:
> > +Note, that memory banks may belong to interleaving nodes. In the example
> > +below an x86 machine has 16Gbytes or RAM in 4 memory banks, even banks
> > +belong to node 0 and odd banks belong to node 1::
> 
> s/or RAM/of RAM/

Thanks
 
> The "Note," is superfluous, you can just write:
> 
> Memory banks may belong to interleaved nodes.

Ok
 
> And I think we prefer the newer form "GiB" for new documentation.

I've used Gbytes in previous examples, so I'd prefer to keep it consistent
We can swipe s/Gbytes/GiB/g later.
 
> > +
> > +  0              4G              8G             12G            16G
> > +  +-------------+ +-------------+ +-------------+ +-------------+
> > +  |    node 0   | |    node 1   | |    node 0   | |    node 1   |
> > +  +-------------+ +-------------+ +-------------+ +-------------+
> > +
> > +  0   16M      4G
> > +  +-----+-------+ +-------------+ +-------------+ +-------------+
> > +  | DMA | DMA32 | |    NORMAL   | |    NORMAL   | |    NORMAL   |
> > +  +-----+-------+ +-------------+ +-------------+ +-------------+
> > +
> > +In such case node 0 will span from 0 to 12 Gbytes and node 1 will span from
> > +4 to 16 Gbytes.
> 
> s/such/this/ (and I'd use GiB again)

-- 
Sincerely yours,
Mike.