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From: Matias Ezequiel Vara Larsen <mvaralar@redhat.com>
To: Harald Mommer <harald.mommer@opensynergy.com>
Cc: Stefano Garzarella <sgarzare@redhat.com>, virtio-comment@lists.linux.dev
Subject: Re: [PATCH] virtio-can: rephrase notification mechanism
Date: Thu, 6 Jun 2024 11:39:44 +0200	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <ZmGD4CufscIixGTo@fedora> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <2e87edd1-897f-4969-a479-3b1b59529ec1@opensynergy.com>

On Wed, Jun 05, 2024 at 07:55:05PM +0200, Harald Mommer wrote:
> Hello,
> 
> exactly this is my problem here also. For me this change looks like saying
> exactly the same thing just in different (not better) words.
> 
> Thinking still about the replacement "from the driver" => "by the driver".
> Was the original "from the driver" correct? My native language is German and
> of course it can be that I made a grammar mistake applying German grammar to
> an English text. Absolutely unclear to me.
> 
> But if it's not that I have as a non-native speaker of English in the moment
> no idea where the improvement is.
> 
> Regards
> Harald
> 
> On 05.06.24 10:46, Stefano Garzarella wrote:
> > On Tue, May 21, 2024 at 04:12:45PM GMT, Matias Ezequiel Vara Larsen
> > wrote:
> > > Rephrase the notification mechanism.
> > 
> > I'd suggest to explain here what are we clarifying with the rephrase.
> > Sorry, I'm not a CAN expert, so I don't understand the difference
> > between the two versions.
> > 

Thanks both for the review. The only sentence that I wanted to change
is:

"As the configuration \field{status} change is caused by a request from
the driver the device is allowed to omit the configuration change
notification here."

I though it could be rewritten in a more direct way like:

"The device may omit the configuration change notification as the
configuration \field{status} change is requested by the driver. "

But I don't know if that clarifies anything. If not, we can drop this
patch.

Matias


  reply	other threads:[~2024-06-06  9:39 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 6+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2024-05-21 14:12 [PATCH] virtio-can: rephrase notification mechanism Matias Ezequiel Vara Larsen
2024-06-05  8:46 ` Stefano Garzarella
2024-06-05 17:55   ` Harald Mommer
2024-06-06  9:39     ` Matias Ezequiel Vara Larsen [this message]
2024-06-11  8:36       ` Stefano Garzarella
2024-06-11 15:48         ` Matias Ezequiel Vara Larsen

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