From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Received: from casper.infradead.org (casper.infradead.org [90.155.50.34]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by smtp.subspace.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 58524204021; Fri, 18 Oct 2024 17:27:10 +0000 (UTC) Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; arc=none smtp.client-ip=90.155.50.34 ARC-Seal:i=1; a=rsa-sha256; d=subspace.kernel.org; s=arc-20240116; t=1729272433; cv=none; b=shq0kv5D2rbMGK1l89YwBrnSknUThu7B/1Q7CcCQjPr+8XJZGWKNHHkMLMboqrtN6rYyOUrekLslKnCkmHwC0bJQQkhVXTGxMcrruEfBIevbdPwzmtZCNPGTG2acS/Wf91O5mJgNQ3LUaG09rJD/W6g6GDI1R2pa1YauX0Gq7MI= ARC-Message-Signature:i=1; a=rsa-sha256; d=subspace.kernel.org; s=arc-20240116; t=1729272433; c=relaxed/simple; bh=bE6vifzumvvXtnJb7LDalxZygUcpdu4wa6kp6lhu0+s=; h=Date:From:To:Cc:Subject:Message-ID:References:MIME-Version: Content-Type:Content-Disposition:In-Reply-To; b=TNp+yFtlrK8j2wYOOcLZKFTTZaQeTmvas143e7rtzGQqKQ5re6PYaYjtuSz2K0dG26RiRvMOdU3BxJJID9GivY9crnUB0MdD0WhiMh/zfvV9uZRuOy2xe9ggRsVUXXQcCy/li6EofeRMVo6l15SgZkG+sbT67yCs4tkB/PhuFhU= ARC-Authentication-Results:i=1; smtp.subspace.kernel.org; dmarc=none (p=none dis=none) header.from=infradead.org; spf=none smtp.mailfrom=infradead.org; dkim=pass (2048-bit key) header.d=infradead.org header.i=@infradead.org header.b=Ij1Aa3QH; arc=none smtp.client-ip=90.155.50.34 Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; dmarc=none (p=none dis=none) header.from=infradead.org Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; spf=none smtp.mailfrom=infradead.org Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; dkim=pass (2048-bit key) header.d=infradead.org header.i=@infradead.org header.b="Ij1Aa3QH" DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; q=dns/txt; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=infradead.org; s=casper.20170209; h=In-Reply-To:Content-Type:MIME-Version: References:Message-ID:Subject:Cc:To:From:Date:Sender:Reply-To: Content-Transfer-Encoding:Content-ID:Content-Description; bh=WtibHSf3FENB+qiCqPpgr10Kf0tCB+aDhSiHwPUqq0k=; b=Ij1Aa3QHYd2SQgxEaEtINmJGLJ EIWyFEiL/OUzWNjJfnakWAx5AN6ta1VwRqEAoDctSazIcd8vznZiFITWTAOcGww2LAOIam7aBN4k9 D14iv21ZKKZdruYE/RXh2rf+2daNepehv+OmDpUmwcviGR7s6raSCjEb2/WexUlHN8YljSKwqO64R j+OsXyVE8dsh7Z0dDbg4fzmm0GBaGWXaoVkCnlvXP+0W0C5aOpzCeYT6WDn2YnLPyLNcsJiYpkTQM DrGdGvJOpb/yTxxerVNAQkp2k3kPRIyL0Dgw33zdY7cM6oRr0mlPHd9oyaSrRN1kWT++eyhLyIIxX 6NBpmUXQ==; Received: from willy by casper.infradead.org with local (Exim 4.98 #2 (Red Hat Linux)) id 1t1qkf-0000000DQ24-3ue8; Fri, 18 Oct 2024 17:27:01 +0000 Date: Fri, 18 Oct 2024 18:27:01 +0100 From: Matthew Wilcox To: Nir Lichtman Cc: jason.wessel@windriver.com, daniel.thompson@linaro.org, dianders@chromium.org, corbet@lwn.net, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org Subject: Re: [PATCH] Documentation: English fixes in kgdb/kdb article Message-ID: References: <20241018163136.GA795979@lichtman.org> Precedence: bulk X-Mailing-List: linux-doc@vger.kernel.org List-Id: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <20241018163136.GA795979@lichtman.org> On Fri, Oct 18, 2024 at 04:31:36PM +0000, Nir Lichtman wrote: > -Next you should choose one of more I/O drivers to interconnect debugging > +Next you should choose one of the I/O drivers to interconnect the debugging Wrong fix ;-) "one or more". > @@ -201,7 +201,7 @@ Using loadable module or built-in > Configure kgdboc at runtime with sysfs > ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ > > -At run time you can enable or disable kgdboc by echoing a parameters > +At run time you can enable or disable kgdboc by echoing the parameters > into the sysfs. Here are two examples: Maybe "by writing parameters into sysfs"? > @@ -631,8 +631,6 @@ automatically changes into kgdb mode. > > kgdb > > - Now disconnect your terminal program and connect gdb in its place > - Is there a reason you deleted this? It seems important.