From: Simon Horman <horms@kernel.org>
To: Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@gmail.com>
Cc: Linux Kernel Mailing List <linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org>,
Linux Documentation <linux-doc@vger.kernel.org>,
Linux Networking <netdev@vger.kernel.org>,
Subash Abhinov Kasiviswanathan
<subash.a.kasiviswanathan@oss.qualcomm.com>,
Sean Tranchetti <sean.tranchetti@oss.qualcomm.com>,
"David S. Miller" <davem@davemloft.net>,
Eric Dumazet <edumazet@google.com>,
Jakub Kicinski <kuba@kernel.org>, Paolo Abeni <pabeni@redhat.com>,
Jonathan Corbet <corbet@lwn.net>,
Sharath Chandra Vurukala <quic_sharathv@quicinc.com>
Subject: Re: [PATCH net] net: rmnet: Fix checksum offload header v5 and aggregation packet formatting
Date: Wed, 15 Oct 2025 17:31:53 +0100 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <aO_MefPIlQQrCU3j@horms.kernel.org> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20251015092540.32282-2-bagasdotme@gmail.com>
On Wed, Oct 15, 2025 at 04:25:41PM +0700, Bagas Sanjaya wrote:
> Packet format for checksum offload header v5 and aggregation, and header
> type table for the former, are shown in normal paragraphs instead.
>
> Use appropriate markup.
>
> Fixes: 710b797cf61b ("docs: networking: Add documentation for MAPv5")
> Fixes: ceed73a2cf4a ("drivers: net: ethernet: qualcomm: rmnet: Initial implementation")
> Signed-off-by: Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@gmail.com>
Thanks Bagas,
I agree these are all good improvements.
I would like to add the following, which I noticed during review, for your
consideration.
diff --git a/Documentation/networking/device_drivers/cellular/qualcomm/rmnet.rst b/Documentation/networking/device_drivers/cellular/qualcomm/rmnet.rst
index 6877a3260582..b532128ee709 100644
--- a/Documentation/networking/device_drivers/cellular/qualcomm/rmnet.rst
+++ b/Documentation/networking/device_drivers/cellular/qualcomm/rmnet.rst
@@ -27,7 +27,8 @@ these MAP frames and send them to appropriate PDN's.
2. Packet format
================
-a. MAP packet v1 (data / control)
+A. MAP packet v1 (data / control)
+---------------------------------
MAP header fields are in big endian format.
@@ -53,7 +54,8 @@ Multiplexer ID is to indicate the PDN on which data has to be sent.
Payload length includes the padding length but does not include MAP header
length.
-b. Map packet v4 (data / control)
+B. Map packet v4 (data / control)
+---------------------------------
MAP header fields are in big endian format.
@@ -80,7 +82,7 @@ Payload length includes the padding length but does not include MAP header
length.
Checksum offload header, has the information about the checksum processing done
-by the hardware.Checksum offload header fields are in big endian format.
+by the hardware. Checksum offload header fields are in big endian format.
Packet format::
@@ -106,7 +108,8 @@ over which checksum is computed.
Checksum value, indicates the checksum computed.
-c. MAP packet v5 (data / control)
+C. MAP packet v5 (data / control)
+---------------------------------
MAP header fields are in big endian format.
@@ -133,7 +136,8 @@ Multiplexer ID is to indicate the PDN on which data has to be sent.
Payload length includes the padding length but does not include MAP header
length.
-d. Checksum offload header v5
+D. Checksum offload header v5
+-----------------------------
Checksum offload header fields are in big endian format.
@@ -158,7 +162,10 @@ indicates that the calculated packet checksum is invalid.
Reserved bits must be zero when sent and ignored when received.
-e. MAP packet v1/v5 (command specific)::
+E. MAP packet v1/v5 (command specific)
+--------------------------------------
+
+Packet format::
Bit 0 1 2-7 8 - 15 16 - 31
Function Command Reserved Pad Multiplexer ID Payload length
@@ -169,7 +176,7 @@ e. MAP packet v1/v5 (command specific)::
Bit 96 - 127
Function Command data
-Command 1 indicates disabling flow while 2 is enabling flow
+Command 1 indicates disabling flow while 2 enables flow.
Command types
@@ -180,7 +187,8 @@ Command types
3 is for error during processing of commands
= ==========================================
-f. Aggregation
+F. Aggregation
+--------------
Aggregation is multiple MAP packets (can be data or command) delivered to
rmnet in a single linear skb. rmnet will process the individual
next prev parent reply other threads:[~2025-10-15 16:31 UTC|newest]
Thread overview: 7+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2025-10-15 9:25 [PATCH net] net: rmnet: Fix checksum offload header v5 and aggregation packet formatting Bagas Sanjaya
2025-10-15 16:31 ` Simon Horman [this message]
2025-10-15 23:57 ` Bagas Sanjaya
2025-10-16 8:12 ` Simon Horman
2025-10-16 9:01 ` Bagas Sanjaya
2025-10-16 22:51 ` Jakub Kicinski
2025-10-16 23:00 ` patchwork-bot+netdevbpf
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