Re: [PATCH] sched/deadline: Fix grammar and typos in comments

[Daniel Bristot de Oliveira <bristot@redhat.com>]

On 5/13/24 18:25, Phil Auld wrote:
> On Mon, May 13, 2024 at 04:19:10PM +0100 Paul Sherwood wrote:
>> On 2024-05-13 14:58, Phil Auld wrote:
>>> On Sat, May 11, 2024 at 09:26:44AM +0100 Paul Sherwood wrote:
>>>> - conjugate verb to match subject of sentence
>>>> - s/a entity/an entity/g
>>>> - s/this misbehave/this misbehaviour/
>>>> - a few typos
>>>>
>>>   - not starting all the lines of a commit message with "-", priceless.
>>>
>>> Plus, you're just repeating what's in the actual patch.
>>>
>>> Otherwise, these changes themselves look good to me.
>>
>> Thanks for the feedback - would you like me to re-submit without the
>> bullet-points, or without the text entirely?
>>
> 
> Personally I'd rather a sentence or two saying something like
> "Fix some types and grammar issues in sched deadline comments."
> Or something.  I know that's basically same as the title, but
> that gets lost in the subject line, so maybe worded a little
> differently? For this it probably doesn't need much but does
> need something. 

Yeah, I would say that a short sentence, then the bullet points, looks
better.

-- Daniel