From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; arc=none smtp.remote-ip=100.103.45.18 ARC-Seal: i=1; d=subspace.kernel.org; s=arc20261015; a=rsa-sha256; cv=none; t=1793667704; b=Jc5BKjd6BsTGQTa0j759Io1yGnwnVBM/3F1AXigG9+ZKoyguFt4/lkPdseSq0rLGJiXN xBsqN0TlV1DtPlEbznw9bfPBAlGHoKjaH9JKvh1LQLXQ31MR9CuHrjpFl1hfAU8fK1C4d to7y8Mn9Hlm2kZgob93vDU/2jUQX6ajmksl+IQWQWLQBfayPNqsaHmysm8+1c3MXtWjJS 3O8TCOdwQH97OOqdZlFsQS5d9zr13yabMk//c6nD+347qVAtWvCLXzjTY9g9Ijw+PnFWW QOevEuzmD7h4h9EMcrMeStOzsJaJ071isob+EAH0iT+wrzayfkVR29tV8B5Z6o+hkPQ== ARC-Message-Signature: i=1; d=subspace.kernel.org; s=arc20261015; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; t=1793667704; h=Received:DKIM-Signature:Message-ID:From:Subject:Reply-To:To:Cc: In-Reply-To:References:Content-Type:Content-Transfer-Encoding:Date; bh=HWpXJ4j0KF5pspc7k3d5PXXfrRuc9RLG54wH4mCUbDc=; b=fjPehQA6ZK+oqfExy7HHBD/2NUyW50W4ZfAumBXmAWe8TZG/QqlFl7U+gt/GYikKjrk9 iExXbafUpdA3XPrpQ6ZffocI9+SGDJZ0mTbid621UhcadIUoAB/jArtYcvBWU73ZrJKvh qsLUXYtvg0V53Tg2dOS6qsqI+Gt3G2HVx0e9uzDlOQZeAl3yBKXLvu6WLyL6dre0vsRSh z9eZ99f1Wq7P+2Va/i+iNYHj8v5WMxhIsz8BZEy1Qci1mg75lz4lHboRFrFbBnk4W2/vx X89C2xfvTvvykG9Gh8pd3e7MIJgmVLmirs977Z3YcIebwk/8st63pOraos9crs+DORA== ARC-Authentication-Results: i=1; smtp.subspace.kernel.org; dkim=pass header.d=kernel.org header.i=@kernel.org header.a=rsa-sha256 header.s=k20260515 header.b=gazaSlGj; arc=none smtp.remote-ip=100.103.45.18 Received: from smtp.kernel.org (quasi.space.kernel.org [100.103.45.18]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature ECDSA (prime256v1)) (No client certificate requested) by smtp.subspace.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 1D6BF606A324 for ; Tue, 3 Nov 2026 01:01:44 +0000 (UTC) Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; dkim=pass (2048-bit key, unprotected) header.d=kernel.org header.i=@kernel.org header.a=rsa-sha256 header.s=k20260515 header.b=gazaSlGj Received: by smtp.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id CE8881F000C1; Tue, 3 Nov 2026 01:01:43 +0000 (UTC) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=kernel.org; s=k20260515; t=1793667704; bh=HWpXJ4j0KF5pspc7k3d5PXXfrRuc9RLG54wH4mCUbDc=; h=From:Subject:Reply-To:To:Cc:In-Reply-To:References:Date; b=gazaSlGj+99y7vw6VBAJ/aYeX1WFpwDMfpHTEmUeaDzL0KejaD0BJmZOmIMGiRlwD 7hAiNafltRKkefEbslmMwkyuTyyFPXyVI5+5uJDMVI9TJW2i6K9C2+sr8nl9DOpH1O q2M384s/Hcvdo62X/HLfjVoPOd0nwYMCSrFtwZpAengVT3cnNc7SdbZnXm0QTTOQVH jge7qcL8tr2X7HoCG7UOHN83UeGhlrDmwBfK8ZgfZLfVXHdrZSInvgZZg0QFmcn2fw +mJ3bmlUXegIu0qdeXIsaukhJY+6uLAD6XH3/QViBpKUjQ3h4gMmml/19ICXrALfM/ 1lYvv4zi1snKQ== Message-ID: From: sashiko-bot@kernel.org Subject: Re: [PATCH v2 5/8] Docs/mm/damon/design: fix grammar and typos Reply-To: sashiko-reviews@lists.linux.dev To: "SJ Park" Cc: damon@lists.linux.dev In-Reply-To: <20261103005940.91432-6-sj@kernel.org> References: <20261103005940.91432-1-sj@kernel.org> <20261103005940.91432-6-sj@kernel.org> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Date: Tue, 03 Nov 2026 01:01:42 +0000 X-Mailing-List: damon@lists.linux.dev List-Id: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: List-Owner: Precedence: list > From: Aveline Noir >=20 > The design doc has quite a few relative clauses that seem to have lost > their verb, like "pages that assumed to have" or "filters that handled > by the core layer". Fix those, along with some agreement issues and a > couple of typos: "Parreto", and "Use space", which I think should be > "User space". Rewrap where the lines got too long. >=20 > Cc: Jonathan Corbet > Cc: Shuah Khan > Cc: Randy Dunlap > Cc: Manuel Ebner > Signed-off-by: Aveline Noir > Reviewed-by: SJ Park > Signed-off-by: SJ Park Sashiko has reviewed this patch and found no issues. --=20 Sashiko AI review =C2=B7 https://sashiko.dev/#/patchset/20261103005940.9143= 2-1-sj@kernel.org?part=3D5