Re: [PATCH 2/5] fetch doc: update note on '+' in front of the refspec

[Junio C Hamano <gitster@pobox.com>]

Marc Branchaud <marcnarc@xiplink.com> writes:

>> +When the remote branch you want to fetch is known to
>> +be rewound and rebased regularly, it is expected that
>> +the tip of it will not be descendant of the commit that
>> +used to be at its tip the last time you fetched it and
>> +stored in your remote-tracking branch.  You would want
>
> I think the second part of that last sentence might be clearer as
>
> 	it is expected that its new tip will not be a descendant of
> 	its previous tip (as stored in your remote-tracking branch
> 	the last time you fetched).

Yeah, that reads better.  Thanks.

>
> Then start the next sentence with
>
> 	In this case, you would want ....

I somehow find that "in this case" redundant, given that "for such
branches" already limits the scope of the suggestion.  I dunno.

>> +to use the `+` sign to indicate non-fast-forward updates
>> +will be needed for such branches.  There is no way to
>> +determine or declare that a branch will be made available
>> +in a repository with this behavior; the pulling user simply
>>  must know this is the expected usage pattern for a branch.
>>  +
>>  [NOTE]
>>