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Tue, 20 Oct 2026 14:27:38 -0400 (EDT) From: Junio C Hamano To: Julia Evans Cc: Julia Evans via GitGitGadget , git@vger.kernel.org Subject: Re: [PATCH 2/2] doc: add new Git tutorial for beginners In-Reply-To: (Julia Evans's message of "Tue, 20 Oct 2026 13:59:28 -0400") References: <41dca2e8e0c5fadb8ad9ed8707029356e56cc540.1791315422.git.gitgitgadget@gmail.com> Date: Tue, 20 Oct 2026 11:27:37 -0700 Message-ID: User-Agent: Gnus/5.13 (Gnus v5.13) X-Mailing-List: git@vger.kernel.org List-Id: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: List-Owner: Precedence: list MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain Julia Evans writes: >> The goal is well described, and overall the tutorial is well-paced >> and avoids common beginner traps. Since Ben has covered the text >> fairly well, the remainder of this message has just some leftover >> nitpicks. My local build of 'seen' just saw these: gittutorial.adoc:124: section delimiter not preceded by an empty line gittutorial.adoc:487: section delimiter not preceded by an empty line I haven't checked what these two lines contain yet. Thanks.