Re: [PATCH 1/1] doc/gitcli: minor fixes

[Junio C Hamano <gitster@pobox.com>]

Dirk Gouders <dirk@gouders.net> writes:

> -This manual describes the convention used throughout Git CLI.
> +This manual describes the conventions used throughout Git CLI.

OK.

> @@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ arguments.  Here are the rules:
>     `v1.0` and `v2.0` are revisions and `arch/x86` and `include/asm-x86`
>     are paths.
>  
> - * When an argument can be misunderstood as either a revision or a path,
> + * When arguments can be misunderstood as either a revision or a path,
>     they can be disambiguated by placing `--` between them.

I would rather have left the subject as-is, and then rewrote the
conclusion part to "it can be disambiguated by placing `--` before
or arter it".  Once you start talking about multiple arguments, you
would have to also reorder them so that all revs come first, then
'--', and then all paths. 

> @@ -76,8 +76,8 @@ you will.
>  Here are the rules regarding the "flags" that you should follow when you are
>  scripting Git:
>  
> - * Splitting short options to separate words (prefer `git foo -a -b`
> -   to `git foo -ab`, the latter may not even work).
> + * Split short options to separate words: prefer `git foo -a -b`
> +   to `git foo -ab` (the latter may not even work).

OK.

Thanks.