From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 From: Thomas Petazzoni Date: Thu, 14 Feb 2013 11:05:36 +0100 Subject: [Buildroot] Buildroot at ELC: review/suggestions needed In-Reply-To: <63C31970879140E7839D65DDAADF4076@beraninstruments.com.local> References: <20130209195709.323b9f5e@skate> <20130213231346.0ed68b45@skate> <63C31970879140E7839D65DDAADF4076@beraninstruments.com.local> Message-ID: <20130214110536.37d54d34@skate> List-Id: MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit To: buildroot@busybox.net Dear Will Moore, On Thu, 14 Feb 2013 09:53:38 -0000, Will Moore wrote: > > The current state of the slides is visible at > > http://free-electrons.com/~thomas/pub/buildroot-slides.pdf. > > > > The two slides about build time and system size are still empty, I'm > > currently making the experiments to get the numbers. > > Looks good, some small suggestions that might improve them: > > Slide 3/11 replace "product makers" with "product manufacturers"? > Slide 6/11 replace "Allows to significantly improve Buildroot > quality, by" with "Allows significant improvement of Buildroot > quality by"? Slide 7/11 I appreciate this is a list of packages but > is it clear that Buildroot can build you a toolchain? I might also > expect to see bootloaders, Linux, busybox earlier in the list as the > starting point of almost all Buildroot usage with the more important > packages later in the list, but I appreciate what is "important" is > personal... Slide 8/11 replace "weights about" with "weighs in at > approximately". Slide 11/11 it might be better to show a more > interesting page of the user manual. Thanks, slides updated to take into account your comments! Thomas -- Thomas Petazzoni, Free Electrons Kernel, drivers, real-time and embedded Linux development, consulting, training and support. http://free-electrons.com