* Re: [PATCH] Aesthetic fixes to DTSpec 0.1, Acknowledgements and Chapter 1
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@ 2017-09-01 19:14 ` Florian Fainelli
2017-09-01 22:00 ` Rob Herring
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From: Florian Fainelli @ 2017-09-01 19:14 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: Robert P. J. Day, devicetree-u79uwXL29TY76Z2rM5mHXA,
devicetree-spec-u79uwXL29TY76Z2rM5mHXA
+devicetree-spec (which is where this should go)
On 08/31/2017 02:50 PM, Robert P. J. Day wrote:
>
> Some aesthetic tweaks to DTSpec 0.1, including
>
> * grammar fixes
> * font fixes
>
> Signed-off-by: Robert P. J. Day <rpjday-L09J2beyid0N/H6P543EQg@public.gmane.org>
>
> ---
>
> i'll do a chunk at a time, to avoid having a sizable submission
> getting hung up on a single issue.
>
> commit 10d4ba9bb1ad5baab5d9bff4e2dac643166f9356
> Author: Robert P. J. Day <rpjday-L09J2beyid0N/H6P543EQg@public.gmane.org>
> Date: Thu Aug 31 17:46:29 2017 -0400
>
> Ack and chapter 1.
>
> diff --git a/source/acknowledgements.rst b/source/acknowledgements.rst
> index 3e49046..a02e0aa 100644
> --- a/source/acknowledgements.rst
> +++ b/source/acknowledgements.rst
> @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
>
> The devicetree.org Technical Steering Committee would like to
> thank the many individuals and companies that contributed to the
> -development this specification through writing, technical discussions
> +development of this specification through writing, technical discussions
> and reviews.
>
> We want to thank the power.org Platform Architecture Technical Subcommittee who
> diff --git a/source/introduction.rst b/source/introduction.rst
> index 30ba3d9..d7dc2fc 100644
> --- a/source/introduction.rst
> +++ b/source/introduction.rst
> @@ -13,10 +13,10 @@ hardware before passing control to software such as an operating system,
> bootloader, or hypervisor. Bootloaders and hypervisors can, in turn,
> load and transfer control to operating systems. Standard, consistent
> interfaces and conventions facilitate the interactions between these
> -software components. In this document the term boot program is used to
> +software components. In this document the term *boot program* is used to
> generically refer to a software component that initializes the system
> state and executes another software component referred to as a *client
> -program*. Examples of a boot programs include: firmware, bootloaders, and
> +program*. Examples of a boot program include: firmware, bootloaders, and
> hypervisors. Examples of a client program include: bootloaders,
> hypervisors, operating systems, and special purpose programs. A piece of
> software may be both a client program and a boot program (e.g. a hypervisor).
> @@ -101,14 +101,14 @@ IEEE 1275 specification that are omitted from the |spec| include:
> * FCode debugging
> * Operating system debugging
>
> -What is retained from IEEE-1275 are concepts from the devicetree
> +What is retained from IEEE 1275 are concepts from the devicetree
> architecture by which a boot program can describe and communicate system
> hardware information to client program, thus eliminating the need for
> the client program to have hard-coded descriptions of system hardware.
>
> This specification partially supersedes the |epapr| [EPAPR] specification.
> -|epapr| documents how devicetree is used by the PowerISA, and covers both
> -general concepts, as well as PowerISA specific bindings.
> +|epapr| documents how devicetree is used by the Power ISA, and covers both
> +general concepts, as well as Power ISA specific bindings.
> The text of this document was derived from |epapr|, but either removes architecture specific bindings, or moves them into an appendix.
>
> 32-bit and 64-bit Support
> @@ -141,7 +141,7 @@ Definition of Terms
> boot program
> Used to generically refer to a software component that initializes
> the system state and executes another software component referred to
> - as a client program. Examples of a boot programs include: firmware,
> + as a client program. Examples of a boot program include: firmware,
> bootloaders, and hypervisors.
>
> client program
>
> rday
>
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Florian
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* Re: [PATCH] Aesthetic fixes to DTSpec 0.1, Acknowledgements and Chapter 1
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2017-09-01 19:14 ` [PATCH] Aesthetic fixes to DTSpec 0.1, Acknowledgements and Chapter 1 Florian Fainelli
@ 2017-09-01 22:00 ` Rob Herring
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From: Rob Herring @ 2017-09-01 22:00 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: Robert P. J. Day
Cc: devicetree-u79uwXL29TY76Z2rM5mHXA@public.gmane.org,
devicetree-spec-u79uwXL29TY76Z2rM5mHXA@public.gmane.org
On Thu, Aug 31, 2017 at 4:50 PM, Robert P. J. Day <rpjday-L09J2beyid0N/H6P543EQg@public.gmane.org> wrote:
>
> Some aesthetic tweaks to DTSpec 0.1, including
>
> * grammar fixes
> * font fixes
>
> Signed-off-by: Robert P. J. Day <rpjday-L09J2beyid0N/H6P543EQg@public.gmane.org>
>
> ---
>
> i'll do a chunk at a time, to avoid having a sizable submission
> getting hung up on a single issue.
>
> commit 10d4ba9bb1ad5baab5d9bff4e2dac643166f9356
> Author: Robert P. J. Day <rpjday-L09J2beyid0N/H6P543EQg@public.gmane.org>
> Date: Thu Aug 31 17:46:29 2017 -0400
>
> Ack and chapter 1.
Your header here is a bit messed up, but git-am seemed to apply it okay.
>
> diff --git a/source/acknowledgements.rst b/source/acknowledgements.rst
> index 3e49046..a02e0aa 100644
> --- a/source/acknowledgements.rst
> +++ b/source/acknowledgements.rst
> @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
>
> The devicetree.org Technical Steering Committee would like to
> thank the many individuals and companies that contributed to the
> -development this specification through writing, technical discussions
> +development of this specification through writing, technical discussions
> and reviews.
>
> We want to thank the power.org Platform Architecture Technical Subcommittee who
> diff --git a/source/introduction.rst b/source/introduction.rst
> index 30ba3d9..d7dc2fc 100644
> --- a/source/introduction.rst
> +++ b/source/introduction.rst
> @@ -13,10 +13,10 @@ hardware before passing control to software such as an operating system,
> bootloader, or hypervisor. Bootloaders and hypervisors can, in turn,
> load and transfer control to operating systems. Standard, consistent
> interfaces and conventions facilitate the interactions between these
> -software components. In this document the term boot program is used to
> +software components. In this document the term *boot program* is used to
> generically refer to a software component that initializes the system
> state and executes another software component referred to as a *client
> -program*. Examples of a boot programs include: firmware, bootloaders, and
> +program*. Examples of a boot program include: firmware, bootloaders, and
> hypervisors. Examples of a client program include: bootloaders,
> hypervisors, operating systems, and special purpose programs. A piece of
> software may be both a client program and a boot program (e.g. a hypervisor).
> @@ -101,14 +101,14 @@ IEEE 1275 specification that are omitted from the |spec| include:
> * FCode debugging
> * Operating system debugging
>
> -What is retained from IEEE-1275 are concepts from the devicetree
> +What is retained from IEEE 1275 are concepts from the devicetree
I still see a mixture in the document. For things like this, better to
do a search and replace for the whole document as 1 commit.
Rob
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