From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 From: Thadeu Lima de Souza Cascardo Subject: [PATCH 1/2] Makes some cleanup/review in gittutorial Date: Mon, 29 Jun 2009 11:05:19 -0300 Message-ID: <1246284319-26451-1-git-send-email-cascardo@holoscopio.com> Cc: Thadeu Lima de Souza Cascardo To: git@vger.kernel.org X-From: git-owner@vger.kernel.org Mon Jun 29 16:14:58 2009 Return-path: Envelope-to: gcvg-git-2@gmane.org Received: from vger.kernel.org ([209.132.176.167]) by lo.gmane.org with esmtp (Exim 4.50) id 1MLHdJ-0004Mx-CU for gcvg-git-2@gmane.org; Mon, 29 Jun 2009 16:14:57 +0200 Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S1759051AbZF2OOm (ORCPT ); Mon, 29 Jun 2009 10:14:42 -0400 Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org id S1755169AbZF2OOl (ORCPT ); Mon, 29 Jun 2009 10:14:41 -0400 Received: from liberdade.minaslivre.org ([72.232.18.203]:37181 "EHLO liberdade.minaslivre.org" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S1759569AbZF2OOj (ORCPT ); Mon, 29 Jun 2009 10:14:39 -0400 X-Greylist: delayed 559 seconds by postgrey-1.27 at vger.kernel.org; Mon, 29 Jun 2009 10:14:39 EDT Received: from vespa.holoscopio.com (unknown [201.80.130.87]) by liberdade.minaslivre.org (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id 80FB7198349; Mon, 29 Jun 2009 11:15:37 -0300 (BRT) Received: by vespa.holoscopio.com (Postfix, from userid 1000) id 9AF0BC580; Mon, 29 Jun 2009 11:05:20 -0300 (BRT) X-Mailer: git-send-email 1.6.3 Sender: git-owner@vger.kernel.org Precedence: bulk List-ID: X-Mailing-List: git@vger.kernel.org Archived-At: From: Thadeu Lima de Souza Cascardo There are some different but little cleanup changes to fix some missing quotes, to fix what seemed to be an unended sentence, to reident a little paragraph with too large a sentence and fix a branch name that was referred to twice later by another name. --- Documentation/gittutorial.txt | 16 ++++++++-------- 1 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) diff --git a/Documentation/gittutorial.txt b/Documentation/gittutorial.txt index c7fa949..f8b5830 100644 --- a/Documentation/gittutorial.txt +++ b/Documentation/gittutorial.txt @@ -332,11 +332,11 @@ alice$ git log -p HEAD..FETCH_HEAD ------------------------------------------------ This operation is safe even if Alice has uncommitted local changes. -The range notation HEAD..FETCH_HEAD" means "show everything that is reachable -from the FETCH_HEAD but exclude anything that is reachable from HEAD. +The range notation "HEAD..FETCH_HEAD" means "show everything that is reachable +from the FETCH_HEAD but exclude anything that is reachable from HEAD". Alice already knows everything that leads to her current state (HEAD), -and reviewing what Bob has in his state (FETCH_HEAD) that she has not -seen with this command +and reviews what Bob has in his state (FETCH_HEAD) that she has not +seen with this command. If Alice wants to visualize what Bob did since their histories forked she can issue the following command: @@ -375,9 +375,9 @@ it easier: alice$ git remote add bob /home/bob/myrepo ------------------------------------------------ -With this, Alice can perform the first part of the "pull" operation alone using the -'git-fetch' command without merging them with her own branch, -using: +With this, Alice can perform the first part of the "pull" operation +alone using the 'git-fetch' command without merging them with her own +branch, using: ------------------------------------- alice$ git fetch bob @@ -566,7 +566,7 @@ $ git log v2.5.. Makefile # commits since v2.5 which modify You can also give 'git-log' a "range" of commits where the first is not necessarily an ancestor of the second; for example, if the tips of -the branches "stable-release" and "master" diverged from a common +the branches "stable" and "master" diverged from a common commit some time ago, then ------------------------------------- -- 1.6.3