* [PATCH] Makes some cleanup/review in gittutorial
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@ 2009-06-29 15:13 ` Thadeu Lima de Souza Cascardo
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From: Thadeu Lima de Souza Cascardo @ 2009-06-29 15:13 UTC (permalink / raw)
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There are some different but little cleanup changes to fix some missing
quotes, to fix what seemed to be an unended sentence, to reident a
little paragraph with too large a sentence and fix a branch name that
was referred to twice later by another name.
Signed-off-by: Thadeu Lima de Souza Cascardo <cascardo@holoscopio.com>
---
Documentation/gittutorial.txt | 24 ++++++++++++------------
1 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)
diff --git a/Documentation/gittutorial.txt b/Documentation/gittutorial.txt
index c7fa949..cf0689c 100644
--- a/Documentation/gittutorial.txt
+++ b/Documentation/gittutorial.txt
@@ -332,11 +332,11 @@ alice$ git log -p HEAD..FETCH_HEAD
------------------------------------------------
This operation is safe even if Alice has uncommitted local changes.
-The range notation HEAD..FETCH_HEAD" means "show everything that is reachable
-from the FETCH_HEAD but exclude anything that is reachable from HEAD.
+The range notation "HEAD..FETCH_HEAD" means "show everything that is reachable
+from the FETCH_HEAD but exclude anything that is reachable from HEAD".
Alice already knows everything that leads to her current state (HEAD),
-and reviewing what Bob has in his state (FETCH_HEAD) that she has not
-seen with this command
+and reviews what Bob has in his state (FETCH_HEAD) that she has not
+seen with this command.
If Alice wants to visualize what Bob did since their histories forked
she can issue the following command:
@@ -375,9 +375,9 @@ it easier:
alice$ git remote add bob /home/bob/myrepo
------------------------------------------------
-With this, Alice can perform the first part of the "pull" operation alone using the
-'git-fetch' command without merging them with her own branch,
-using:
+With this, Alice can perform the first part of the "pull" operation
+alone using the 'git-fetch' command without merging them with her own
+branch, using:
-------------------------------------
alice$ git fetch bob
@@ -566,22 +566,22 @@ $ git log v2.5.. Makefile # commits since v2.5 which modify
You can also give 'git-log' a "range" of commits where the first is not
necessarily an ancestor of the second; for example, if the tips of
-the branches "stable-release" and "master" diverged from a common
+the branches "stable" and "master" diverged from a common
commit some time ago, then
-------------------------------------
-$ git log stable..experimental
+$ git log stable..master
-------------------------------------
-will list commits made in the experimental branch but not in the
+will list commits made in the master branch but not in the
stable branch, while
-------------------------------------
-$ git log experimental..stable
+$ git log master..stable
-------------------------------------
will show the list of commits made on the stable branch but not
-the experimental branch.
+the master branch.
The 'git-log' command has a weakness: it must present commits in a
list. When the history has lines of development that diverged and
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1.6.3
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