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From: Stephen Boyd <bebarino@gmail.com>
To: git@vger.kernel.org
Cc: Junio C Hamano <gitster@pobox.com>
Subject: [PATCH] Documentation: reword --thin description
Date: Tue,  9 Feb 2010 21:14:11 -0800	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <1265778851-5397-1-git-send-email-bebarino@gmail.com> (raw)

Signed-off-by: Stephen Boyd <bebarino@gmail.com>
---

Don't know if git-push needs to say that --thin is passed to send-pack.

 Documentation/git-fetch-pack.txt |    4 ++--
 Documentation/git-push.txt       |    6 +++---
 Documentation/git-send-pack.txt  |    4 ++--
 3 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/git-fetch-pack.txt b/Documentation/git-fetch-pack.txt
index e9952e8..2b4e4dd 100644
--- a/Documentation/git-fetch-pack.txt
+++ b/Documentation/git-fetch-pack.txt
@@ -44,8 +44,8 @@ OPTIONS
 	locked against repacking.
 
 --thin::
-	Spend extra cycles to minimize the number of objects to be sent.
-	Use it on slower connection.
+	Spend extra cycles minimizing the number of sent objects.
+	Use it with a slow connection.
 
 --include-tag::
 	If the remote side supports it, annotated tags objects will
diff --git a/Documentation/git-push.txt b/Documentation/git-push.txt
index bd79119..a14bc9c 100644
--- a/Documentation/git-push.txt
+++ b/Documentation/git-push.txt
@@ -141,9 +141,9 @@ useful if you write an alias or script around 'git push'.
 
 --thin::
 --no-thin::
-	These options are passed to 'git send-pack'.  Thin
-	transfer spends extra cycles to minimize the number of
-	objects to be sent and meant to be used on slower connection.
+	These options are passed to 'git send-pack'.  A thin
+	transfer spends extra cycles minimizing the number of
+	sent objects and is meant to be used with a slow connection.
 
 -v::
 --verbose::
diff --git a/Documentation/git-send-pack.txt b/Documentation/git-send-pack.txt
index 8178d92..0a78dac 100644
--- a/Documentation/git-send-pack.txt
+++ b/Documentation/git-send-pack.txt
@@ -48,8 +48,8 @@ OPTIONS
 	Run verbosely.
 
 --thin::
-	Spend extra cycles to minimize the number of objects to be sent.
-	Use it on slower connection.
+	Spend extra cycles minimizing the number of sent objects.
+	Use it with a slow connection.
 
 <host>::
 	A remote host to house the repository.  When this
-- 
1.7.0.rc2

             reply	other threads:[~2010-02-10  5:14 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 11+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2010-02-10  5:14 Stephen Boyd [this message]
2010-02-10 16:07 ` [PATCH] Documentation: reword --thin description Nicolas Pitre
2010-02-10 16:52   ` Stephen Boyd
2010-02-10 18:59   ` Junio C Hamano
2010-02-10 21:04     ` Nicolas Pitre
2010-02-12  8:00 ` [PATCHv2] Documentation: describe --thin more accurately Stephen Boyd
2010-02-12 17:36   ` Junio C Hamano
2010-02-15 19:33   ` [PATCHv3] " Stephen Boyd
2010-02-15 20:44     ` Junio C Hamano
2010-02-18  8:33       ` Stephen Boyd
2010-02-18  9:10     ` [PATCHv4] " Stephen Boyd

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