From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 From: Philip Oakley Subject: [PATCH 3/8] Doc: Improve shallow depth wording Date: Sun, 16 Sep 2012 11:57:58 +0100 Message-ID: <1347793083-4136-4-git-send-email-philipoakley@iee.org> To: gitList X-From: git-owner@vger.kernel.org Sun Sep 16 14:45:13 2012 Return-path: Envelope-to: gcvg-git-2@plane.gmane.org Received: from vger.kernel.org ([209.132.180.67]) by plane.gmane.org with esmtp (Exim 4.69) (envelope-from ) id 1TDEDl-0003YP-GG for gcvg-git-2@plane.gmane.org; Sun, 16 Sep 2012 14:45:09 +0200 Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S1751462Ab2IPMoQ (ORCPT ); Sun, 16 Sep 2012 08:44:16 -0400 Received: from smtp2go.com ([207.58.142.213]:41657 "EHLO smtp2go.com" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S1751004Ab2IPMoQ (ORCPT ); Sun, 16 Sep 2012 08:44:16 -0400 X-Mailer: git-send-email 1.7.8.msysgit.0 Sender: git-owner@vger.kernel.org Precedence: bulk List-ID: X-Mailing-List: git@vger.kernel.org Archived-At: Avoid confusion in compound sentence about the start of the commit set and the depth measure. Use two sentences. Signed-off-by: Philip Oakley diff --git a/Documentation/technical/pack-protocol.txt b/Documentation/technical/pack-protocol.txt index 49cdc57..fa4acab 100644 --- a/Documentation/technical/pack-protocol.txt +++ b/Documentation/technical/pack-protocol.txt @@ -258,9 +258,11 @@ a positive depth, this step is skipped. unshallow-line = PKT-LINE("unshallow" SP obj-id) ---- -If the client has requested a positive depth, the server will compute -the set of commits which are no deeper than the desired depth, starting -at the client's wants. The server writes 'shallow' lines for each +If the client has requested a positive depth the server will compute +the set of commits which are no deeper than the desired depth. The set +of commits start at the client's wants. + +The server writes 'shallow' lines for each commit whose parents will not be sent as a result. The server writes an 'unshallow' line for each commit which the client has indicated is shallow, but is no longer shallow at the currently requested depth -- 1.7.8.msysgit.0