From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 From: Philip Oakley Subject: [PATCHv2 3/8] Doc: Improve shallow depth wording Date: Wed, 19 Sep 2012 00:25:29 +0100 Message-ID: <1348010734-664-4-git-send-email-philipoakley@iee.org> To: gitList X-From: git-owner@vger.kernel.org Wed Sep 19 01:25:04 2012 Return-path: Envelope-to: gcvg-git-2@plane.gmane.org Received: from vger.kernel.org ([209.132.180.67]) by plane.gmane.org with esmtp (Exim 4.69) (envelope-from ) id 1TE7A3-0005Bj-K3 for gcvg-git-2@plane.gmane.org; Wed, 19 Sep 2012 01:24:59 +0200 Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S1752594Ab2IRXYt (ORCPT ); Tue, 18 Sep 2012 19:24:49 -0400 Received: from out1.ip07ir2.opaltelecom.net ([62.24.128.243]:24050 "EHLO out1.ip07ir2.opaltelecom.net" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S1752043Ab2IRXYq (ORCPT ); Tue, 18 Sep 2012 19:24:46 -0400 X-IronPort-Anti-Spam-Filtered: true X-IronPort-Anti-Spam-Result: AgUFAMwBWVBZ8rU+/2dsb2JhbABFhSC3IYEJgn07gQIkE4gEmQmhTpILA6YEgmc X-IronPort-AV: E=Sophos;i="4.80,445,1344207600"; d="scan'208";a="47757874" Received: from host-89-242-181-62.as13285.net (HELO localhost) ([89.242.181.62]) by out1.ip07ir2.opaltelecom.net with ESMTP; 19 Sep 2012 00:24:44 +0100 X-Mailer: git-send-email 1.7.8.msysgit.0 Sender: git-owner@vger.kernel.org Precedence: bulk List-ID: X-Mailing-List: git@vger.kernel.org Archived-At: Avoid confusion in compound sentence about the start of the commit set and the depth measure. Use two sentences. Signed-off-by: Philip Oakley diff --git a/Documentation/technical/pack-protocol.txt b/Documentation/technical/pack-protocol.txt index 49cdc57..d51e20f 100644 --- a/Documentation/technical/pack-protocol.txt +++ b/Documentation/technical/pack-protocol.txt @@ -259,8 +259,10 @@ a positive depth, this step is skipped. ---- If the client has requested a positive depth, the server will compute -the set of commits which are no deeper than the desired depth, starting -at the client's wants. The server writes 'shallow' lines for each +the set of commits which are no deeper than the desired depth. The set +of commits start at the client's wants. + +The server writes 'shallow' lines for each commit whose parents will not be sent as a result. The server writes an 'unshallow' line for each commit which the client has indicated is shallow, but is no longer shallow at the currently requested depth -- 1.7.8.msysgit.0