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* [PATCH] Documentation: improve phrasing in git-push.txt
@ 2012-11-27  1:37 Mark Szepieniec
  2012-11-27 17:09 ` Junio C Hamano
  0 siblings, 1 reply; 2+ messages in thread
From: Mark Szepieniec @ 2012-11-27  1:37 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: git; +Cc: Mark Szepieniec

The current version contains the sentence:

Further suppose that the other person already pushed changes leading to
A back to the original repository you two obtained the original commit
X.

which doesn't parse for me; I've changed it to

Further suppose that the other person already pushed changes leading to
A back to the original repository from which you two obtained the
original commit X.

Signed-off-by: Mark Szepieniec <mszepien@gmail.com>
---
 Documentation/git-push.txt |    3 ++-
 1 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 1 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/git-push.txt b/Documentation/git-push.txt
index fe46c42..6d19d59 100644
--- a/Documentation/git-push.txt
+++ b/Documentation/git-push.txt
@@ -286,7 +286,8 @@ leading to commit A.  The history looks like this:
 ----------------
 
 Further suppose that the other person already pushed changes leading to A
-back to the original repository you two obtained the original commit X.
+back to the original repository from which you two obtained the original
+commit X.
 
 The push done by the other person updated the branch that used to point at
 commit X to point at commit A.  It is a fast-forward.
-- 
1.7.5.4

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