From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 From: Andy Parkins Subject: [PATCH] Edit user manual for grammar Date: Tue, 12 Jun 2007 16:43:19 +0100 Message-ID: <200706121643.19837.andyparkins@gmail.com> References: <588192970706120518p201b52fdi9ed48896278b9f3e@mail.gmail.com> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit To: git@vger.kernel.org X-From: git-owner@vger.kernel.org Tue Jun 12 17:43:33 2007 Return-path: Envelope-to: gcvg-git@gmane.org Received: from vger.kernel.org ([209.132.176.167]) by lo.gmane.org with esmtp (Exim 4.50) id 1Hy8Wp-0008NS-NO for gcvg-git@gmane.org; Tue, 12 Jun 2007 17:43:32 +0200 Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S1755298AbXFLPn1 (ORCPT ); Tue, 12 Jun 2007 11:43:27 -0400 Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org id S1755216AbXFLPn0 (ORCPT ); Tue, 12 Jun 2007 11:43:26 -0400 Received: from mu-out-0910.google.com ([209.85.134.190]:56436 "EHLO mu-out-0910.google.com" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S1755215AbXFLPn0 (ORCPT ); Tue, 12 Jun 2007 11:43:26 -0400 Received: by mu-out-0910.google.com with SMTP id i10so1549779mue for ; Tue, 12 Jun 2007 08:43:24 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=beta; h=domainkey-signature:received:received:in-reply-to:references:from:date:subject:to:x-tuid:x-uid:x-length:mime-version:content-transfer-encoding:content-disposition:message-id; b=A714L4MhGT5p+jPdJ2SmMUtkyApsk/Nv3rWIlYZUyWO0iVwmbE69qUe350tJzXzm3Jw+NKnZzPV59qfDk2uTdo610jsvd3pH5yJi/wwRkoxBKRg4wF2QDbUzba/d6CEk80p8IxyYAtu3xAwREzfBknRuUA4dER7RxVIdD3OYBoE= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=gmail.com; s=beta; h=received:in-reply-to:references:from:date:subject:to:x-tuid:x-uid:x-length:mime-version:content-transfer-encoding:content-disposition:message-id; b=Bs+hAfVg1gnxXq4l+RPZuY30Oeq1xYRpr/IgqzPUNN/vSQpoDTOYDrPQX5f0IBy3LajPnMlJ4oIrpwTEFCvaaqJ4Sw2SDI/vT3YLcl1zu+fEfIa2UVrMKP4U9xqjK003sIpMFzB1GvSEcP1PvlW74jX3KBcNqsdXg43MrktSYwQ= Received: by 10.82.112.3 with SMTP id k3mr13545307buc.1181663003403; Tue, 12 Jun 2007 08:43:23 -0700 (PDT) Received: from dvr.360vision.com ( [194.70.53.227]) by mx.google.com with ESMTP id z40sm16858024ikz.2007.06.12.08.43.22 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=OTHER); Tue, 12 Jun 2007 08:43:22 -0700 (PDT) In-Reply-To: <588192970706120518p201b52fdi9ed48896278b9f3e@mail.gmail.com> X-TUID: cefe01bfc2891692 X-UID: 317 X-Length: 1827 Content-Disposition: inline Sender: git-owner@vger.kernel.org Precedence: bulk X-Mailing-List: git@vger.kernel.org Archived-At: - "last-resort" is two words, not a conjoined word, it doesn't require the hyphen - "method of" is vulgar, "method for" is nicer - "recovery" becomes "recovering" from Steve Hoelzer's original version of this patch - "if you want" is nicer as "if you wish" - "you may" should be "you can"; "you may" is "you have permission to" rather than "you can"'s "it is possible to" Signed-off-by: Andy Parkins --- My apologies for jumping on your patch, but when I read the context of your change, I couldn't resist fixing some things around it too. Documentation/user-manual.txt | 6 +++--- 1 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/Documentation/user-manual.txt b/Documentation/user-manual.txt index 7eaafa8..d62ccd0 100644 --- a/Documentation/user-manual.txt +++ b/Documentation/user-manual.txt @@ -1527,9 +1527,9 @@ dangling tree b24c2473f1fd3d91352a624795be026d64c8841f ------------------------------------------------- Dangling objects are not a problem. At worst they may take up a little -extra disk space. They can sometimes provide a last-resort method of -recovery lost work--see <> for details. However, if -you want, you may remove them with gitlink:git-prune[1] or the --prune +extra disk space. They can sometimes provide a last resort method for +recovering lost work--see <> for details. However, if +you wish, you can remove them with gitlink:git-prune[1] or the --prune option to gitlink:git-gc[1]: ------------------------------------------------- -- 1.5.2.1.134.gd166e