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From: Jeff King <peff@peff.net>
To: Junio C Hamano <gitster@pobox.com>
Cc: git@vger.kernel.org, Ian Katz <ifreecarve@gmail.com>,
	Miklos Vajna <vmiklos@frugalware.org>
Subject: Re: [PATCH] tutorial: clarify "pull" is "fetch + merge"
Date: Thu, 10 Jul 2008 22:41:37 -0400	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <20080711024137.GA14967@sigill.intra.peff.net> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <7vskuho3lm.fsf_-_@gitster.siamese.dyndns.org>

On Thu, Jul 10, 2008 at 02:01:57PM -0700, Junio C Hamano wrote:

> This adds a missing demonstration of the longhand form, and a new
> paragraph to explain why some people might want to fetch before pull.

A few English/typo nits below.

> +Alice can peek what Bob did without merging first, using the "fetch"

s/peek/& at/

> +command; this allows Alice to inspect what bob did, using a special

s/bob/\u&/

> -With this, Alice can perform the first operation alone using the
> +With this, Alice can perform the first part of "pull" operation alone using the

Should be either 'the "pull" operation' or 'a "pull" operation'.

-Peff

      reply	other threads:[~2008-07-11  2:44 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 5+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
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2008-07-10 16:12       ` [PATCH] tutorial: prefix the prompts with names alice or bob, to make it clear who is doing what Ian Katz
2008-07-10 16:45         ` Miklos Vajna
2008-07-10 18:27           ` Ian Katz
2008-07-10 21:01             ` [PATCH] tutorial: clarify "pull" is "fetch + merge" Junio C Hamano
2008-07-11  2:41               ` Jeff King [this message]

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