Re: [PATCH 4/4] Documentation/git-commit.txt: correct a few minor grammatical mistakes

[Jonathan Nieder <jrnieder@gmail.com>]

Brandon Casey wrote:

> --- a/Documentation/git-commit.txt
> +++ b/Documentation/git-commit.txt
> @@ -174,10 +174,10 @@ OPTIONS
>  --cleanup=<mode>::
>  	This option sets how the commit message is cleaned up.
>  	The  '<mode>' can be one of 'verbatim', 'whitespace', 'strip',
> -	and 'default'. The 'default' mode will strip leading and
> +	or 'default'. The 'default' mode will strip leading and
>  	trailing empty lines and #commentary from the commit message
> -	only if the message is to be edited. Otherwise only whitespace
> -	removed. The 'verbatim' mode does not change message at all,
> +	only if the message is to be edited. Otherwise only whitespace is
> +	removed. The 'verbatim' mode does not change the message at all,
>  	'whitespace' removes just leading/trailing whitespace lines
>  	and 'strip' removes both whitespace and commentary. The default
>  	can be changed by the 'commit.cleanup' configuration variable

Yeah, the current text is a bit choppy.  How about this?

Signed-off-by: Jonathan Nieder <jrnieder@gmail.com>

--- i/Documentation/git-commit.txt
+++ w/Documentation/git-commit.txt
@@ -172,16 +172,25 @@ OPTIONS
        linkgit:git-commit-tree[1].
 
 --cleanup=<mode>::
-	This option sets how the commit message is cleaned up.
-	The  '<mode>' can be one of 'verbatim', 'whitespace', 'strip',
-	and 'default'. The 'default' mode will strip leading and
-	trailing empty lines and #commentary from the commit message
-	only if the message is to be edited. Otherwise only whitespace
-	removed. The 'verbatim' mode does not change message at all,
-	'whitespace' removes just leading/trailing whitespace lines
-	and 'strip' removes both whitespace and commentary. The default
-	can be changed by the 'commit.cleanup' configuration variable
-	(see linkgit:git-config[1]).
+	This option determines how the supplied commit message should be
+	cleaned up before committing. The '<mode>' can be `verbatim`,
+	`whitespace`, `strip`, or `default`.
++
+--
+default::
+	Strip leading and trailing empty lines and #commentary from
+	the commit message only if the message is to be edited.
+	Otherwise only remove whitespace.
+verbatim::
+	Do not change the message at all.
+whitespace::
+	Remove only leading and trailing whitespace lines.
+strip::
+	Remove both whitespace and commentary.
+--
++
+The default can be changed using the 'commit.cleanup' configuration
+variable (see linkgit:git-config[1]).
 
 -e::
 --edit::