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Subject: Re: [PATCH] pulling signed tag: add howto document
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On 12-01-18 05:27 PM, Junio C Hamano wrote:
> Marc Branchaud <marcnarc@xiplink.com> writes:
> 
>> It might be better to just move the footnote to the end of the next sentence.
> 
> Ok. How does this version look?  The highlights are:
> 
>  * remove footnotes and spell them out inline, like "Note that..."
> 
>  * "a single liner" -> "a one-liner"

IMO "one-liner" should be "one-line", but toMAYto toMAHto...

The rest looks good.

		M.