From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 From: Jeremy White Subject: Re: [PATCH] Documentation: Use 'First Paragraph' instead of 'First Line'. Date: Thu, 13 Sep 2012 15:57:39 -0500 Message-ID: <505248C3.7000803@codeweavers.com> References: <5051D4A0.4060608@codeweavers.com> <7vehm593v8.fsf@alter.siamese.dyndns.org> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Cc: git@vger.kernel.org To: Junio C Hamano X-From: git-owner@vger.kernel.org Thu Sep 13 22:57:58 2012 Return-path: Envelope-to: gcvg-git-2@plane.gmane.org Received: from vger.kernel.org ([209.132.180.67]) by plane.gmane.org with esmtp (Exim 4.69) (envelope-from ) id 1TCGTv-0007IG-Pz for gcvg-git-2@plane.gmane.org; Thu, 13 Sep 2012 22:57:52 +0200 Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S1758818Ab2IMU5m (ORCPT ); Thu, 13 Sep 2012 16:57:42 -0400 Received: from mail.codeweavers.com ([216.251.189.131]:46368 "EHLO mail.codeweavers.com" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S1752419Ab2IMU5l (ORCPT ); Thu, 13 Sep 2012 16:57:41 -0400 Received: from jwhite.mn.codeweavers.com ([10.69.137.101] ident=jwhite) by mail.codeweavers.com with esmtpsa (TLS1.0:RSA_AES_256_CBC_SHA1:32) (Exim 4.72) (envelope-from ) id 1TCGTj-0001Gk-Fx; Thu, 13 Sep 2012 15:57:39 -0500 User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (X11; Linux x86_64; rv:10.0.4) Gecko/20120510 Icedove/10.0.4 In-Reply-To: <7vehm593v8.fsf@alter.siamese.dyndns.org> X-Enigmail-Version: 1.4.1 Sender: git-owner@vger.kernel.org Precedence: bulk List-ID: X-Mailing-List: git@vger.kernel.org Archived-At: Thanks for the feedback; new patch inbound. Minor nits: >> diff --git a/Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt b/Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt >> index f7815e9..92f97e6 100644 >> --- a/Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt >> +++ b/Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt >> @@ -956,7 +956,7 @@ $ git show-branch --topo-order --more=1 master mybranch >> ------------------------------------------------ >> >> The first two lines indicate that it is showing the two branches >> -and the first line of the commit log message from their >> +and the first paragraph of the commit log message from their >> top-of-the-tree commits, you are currently on `master` branch >> (notice the asterisk `\*` character), and the first column for >> the later output lines is used to show commits contained in the > > Ditto. I did not substantially alter this. The emphasis of this section is on the broader show-branch output, and belaboring the subject would be distracting and unnecessary imho. Cheers, Jeremy