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Subject: Re: [PATCH 02/10] user-manual: revise birdseye-view chapter
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"J. Bruce Fields" <bfields@citi.umich.edu> writes:

> From: J. Bruce Fields <bfields@citi.umich.edu>
>
> Some revisions suggested by Junio along with some minor style fixes and
> one compile fix (asterisks need escaping).
>
> Cc: Johannes Schindelin <Johannes.Schindelin@gmx.de>
> Signed-off-by: "J. Bruce Fields" <bfields@citi.umich.edu>
> ---
>  Documentation/user-manual.txt |   43 +++++++++++++++++++---------------------
>  1 files changed, 20 insertions(+), 23 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/Documentation/user-manual.txt b/Documentation/user-manual.txt
> index bac9660..7abdc3e 100644
> --- a/Documentation/user-manual.txt
> +++ b/Documentation/user-manual.txt
> @@ -3161,8 +3161,12 @@ contrast, running "git prune" while somebody is actively changing the
>  repository is a *BAD* idea).
>  
>  [[birdview-on-the-source-code]]
> -A birdview on Git's source code
> ------------------------------
> +A birds-eye view of Git's source code
> +-------------------------------------
> +
> +It is not always easy for new developers to find their way through Git's
> +source code.  This section gives you a gentle guidance to show where to
> +start.
>  
>  While Git's source code is quite elegant, it is not always easy for
>  new  developers to find their way through it.  A good idea is to look

Perhaps you meant to drop this first sentence "While ... through
it." from the original?