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Frank Lichtenheld <frank@lichtenheld.de> writes:

>  -i, --interactive::
> -	Run interactively, just like git-applymbox.
> +	Run interactively, just like `git-applymbox` (see gitlink:git-applymbox[1]).

This is an unclear description from the original, but I think we
should say just like `git-applybox -i`, or drop this altogether.

> @@ -99,7 +102,7 @@ message, and commit author time is taken from the "Date: " line
>  of the message.  The "Subject: " line is used as the title of
>  the commit, after stripping common prefix "[PATCH <anything>]".
>  It is supposed to describe what the commit is about concisely as
> -a one line text.
> +an one line text.

I think 'one' does not begin with a vowel.

Other than that, I would agree everything in your update is a
clear improvement.