From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.4.0 (2014-02-07) on dcvr.yhbt.net X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-ASN: AS31976 209.132.180.0/23 X-Spam-Status: No, score=-4.9 required=3.0 tests=AWL,BAYES_00, HEADER_FROM_DIFFERENT_DOMAINS,RCVD_IN_DNSWL_HI,RP_MATCHES_RCVD, STOX_REPLY_TYPE shortcircuit=no autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no version=3.4.0 Received: from vger.kernel.org (vger.kernel.org [209.132.180.67]) by dcvr.yhbt.net (Postfix) with ESMTP id 1C0421FF7F for ; Sat, 10 Dec 2016 20:28:32 +0000 (UTC) Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S1752094AbcLJU2a (ORCPT ); Sat, 10 Dec 2016 15:28:30 -0500 Received: from smtp-out-6.talktalk.net ([62.24.135.70]:36102 "EHLO smtp-out-6.talktalk.net" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S1752034AbcLJU23 (ORCPT ); Sat, 10 Dec 2016 15:28:29 -0500 Received: from PhilipOakley ([92.22.22.210]) by smtp.talktalk.net with SMTP id FoFuc6HYmgKstFoFucLAu2; Sat, 10 Dec 2016 20:28:27 +0000 X-Originating-IP: [92.22.22.210] X-Spam: 0 X-OAuthority: v=2.2 cv=GdBVpkfL c=1 sm=1 tr=0 a=ml+yzTU89BnYyX12/wy+jA==:117 a=ml+yzTU89BnYyX12/wy+jA==:17 a=8nJEP1OIZ-IA:10 a=pGLkceISAAAA:8 a=Z8y99KKd0XAkE2ex-9sA:9 a=wPNLvfGTeEIA:10 a=6kGIvZw6iX1k4Y-7sg4_:22 Message-ID: <88A192B34B3D4DDDA47628687AE458D3@PhilipOakley> Reply-To: "Philip Oakley" From: "Philip Oakley" To: "Kristoffer Haugsbakk" , Cc: "Kristoffer Haugsbakk" References: <20161209155112.2112-1-kristoffer.haugsbakk@gmail.com> <20161209155112.2112-2-kristoffer.haugsbakk@gmail.com> Subject: Re: [PATCH 1/4] doc: add articles (grammar) Date: Sat, 10 Dec 2016 20:28:27 -0000 Organization: OPDS MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; format=flowed; charset="iso-8859-1"; reply-type=original Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-Priority: 3 X-MSMail-Priority: Normal X-Mailer: Microsoft Outlook Express 6.00.2900.5931 X-MimeOLE: Produced By Microsoft MimeOLE V6.00.2900.6157 X-CMAE-Envelope: MS4wfAm7/xrjVyMD2CrzF+oin1NEjMoImhdzjXt0WFD82WEAmZdIDk18bB8HH2HlKy+VoLuXUikl06YdlzFrQSHE9ktdCXNTq4l9y77dzEDyuL2iHdeZRDbh vK2XIGdPChemI5GH1GtJ3a/uLgEAF7bfbym1u6oJSr74JmznSwhSJhJYu7qQgdHTrPpOI8JQfRMQ6u7IAwVbaDkGcGeKAuz+32NvzwI8il6amOPVIUBxf5l/ BAuign+ylhtzC09S5NFIuw== Sender: git-owner@vger.kernel.org Precedence: bulk List-ID: X-Mailing-List: git@vger.kernel.org From: "Kristoffer Haugsbakk" Sent: Friday, December 09, 2016 3:51 PM > Add definite and indefinite articles in three places where they were > missing. > > - Use "the" in front of a directory name > - Use "the" in front of "style of cooperation" > - Use an indefinite article in front of "CVS background" > > Signed-off-by: Kristoffer Haugsbakk > --- > Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt | 6 +++--- > 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) > > diff --git a/Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt > b/Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt > index 4546fa0d7..6c434aff3 100644 > --- a/Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt > +++ b/Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt > @@ -1368,7 +1368,7 @@ $ git repack > will do it for you. If you followed the tutorial examples, you > would have accumulated about 17 objects in `.git/objects/??/` > directories by now. 'git repack' tells you how many objects it > -packed, and stores the packed file in `.git/objects/pack` > +packed, and stores the packed file in the `.git/objects/pack` > directory. > > [NOTE] > @@ -1543,9 +1543,9 @@ like this: > Working with Others, Shared Repository Style > -------------------------------------------- > > -If you are coming from CVS background, the style of cooperation > +If you are coming from a CVS background, the style of cooperation > suggested in the previous section may be new to you. You do not > -have to worry. Git supports "shared public repository" style of > +have to worry. Git supports the "shared public repository" style of > cooperation you are probably more familiar with as well. > > See linkgit:gitcvs-migration[7] for the details. > -- > 2.11.0 This looks good to me. -- Philip (UK)